Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
Yeah, I like reading. When I was a child I used to like reading novels. The story were really interesting. And now I like reading English books because I major in English.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
I prefer reading in on on a screen because it was really convenient that we only need to carry a phone. Umm and a book is a little bit hurry for heavy for us to carry.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
If the plot were is interesting, I will turn down my reading speed and when I read something or not so important such as.
Examinador
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidato
To be honest, I prefer detailed reading. I hope I can understand every single part of the story, but actually I just can scanning now.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,句子语法要准确,避免冗长与重复。可以用一两句说明现在和过去的喜好,并给出具体例子或原因来丰富内容。注意时态一致(过去时和现在时),以及主谓一致(stories were)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoyed reading novels as a child because I loved getting lost in their stories. Now that I major in English, I often read English books to improve my language skills and learn about different writing styles.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: 回答需要更清晰、语法正确并使用连贯连接词。直接给出偏好理由并举具体对比,避免口头语和重复(如“in on on”)。注意形容词用法(heavy,而不是 hurry),句子流畅性和简洁性很重要。
Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is much more convenient — I can carry dozens of books on my phone. In contrast, physical books are bulky and harder to transport, especially when I travel.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 答案不完整且有语法错误,应直接回答两个情境(何时仔细阅读、何时不用),并提供清晰具体的例子。使用连词衔接想法,保持句子完整,避免模糊表达。
Ejemplo: I read carefully when the material is important or complex, for example academic articles or textbooks, because I need to understand details. Conversely, I skim when the content is casual or less relevant, such as news headlines or social media posts.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答表达清晰但语法与流畅性欠佳。应解释原因并用对比连接词(however, but)说明现实情况。减少语法错误('I just can scan'而不是 'can scanning'),并尽量控制长度。
Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand every aspect of a story. However, due to time constraints lately, I often have to skim articles instead of reading them thoroughly.
× The story were really interesting.
✓ The stories were really interesting.
问题类型:复数与主谓一致(Singular and plural issue / Subject-verb agreement)。原句中使用了复数动词 were,但主语 the story 为单数,造成不一致。根据上下文,学生想表达“那些故事很有趣”,应使用复数名词 stories 与 were 匹配;如果指单个故事,应改为“The story was really interesting.”。建议:判断主语是单数还是复数,选择相应动词形式。
× I prefer reading in on on a screen because it was really convenient that we only need to carry a phone. Umm and a book is a little bit hurry for heavy for us to carry.
✓ I prefer reading on a screen because it is really convenient — we only need to carry a phone. A book is a bit too heavy for us to carry.
问题类型:冠词/词序与用词错误(Article errors / Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / Sentence structure errors)。原句存在重复介词“in on on”、时态与语气不一致(used past vs present convenience)以及用词错误(hurry 用错,应为 heavy 或 too heavy,且结构混乱)。改为“I prefer reading on a screen”(固定搭配为 read/reading on a screen)。将“it was really convenient that we only need to carry a phone”调整为现在时“it is really convenient — we only need to carry a phone”。最后一句改为“A book is a bit too heavy for us to carry.” 建议:避免重复介词,注意固定搭配(read on a screen),保持时态一致,使用恰当形容词和副词顺序。
× If the plot were is interesting, I will turn down my reading speed and when I read something or not so important such as.
✓ If the plot is interesting, I will slow down my reading speed; when I read something not so important, I read faster.
问题类型:虚拟语气/时态与动词形式错误(There be issue / Present tense issue / Verb form)。原句混合了 were 与 is,且结构不完整和词序混乱。条件句用于真实情况应使用一般现在时“If the plot is interesting”。“turn down my reading speed”可改为更自然的“slow down my reading speed”。后半句应完整表达对比:当阅读不重要的内容时读得更快。建议:在条件句中使用一致的时态,保持句子完整,使用常见搭配(slow down / read faster)。
× I hope I can understand every single part of the story, but actually I just can scanning now.
✓ I hope I can understand every single part of the story, but actually I can only scan now.
问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式与情态动词搭配(Verb + -ing form / Modal verb usage)。原句中情态动词 can 后应接动词原形而不是现在分词,因此不能说 “can scanning”。此外语序和限定词位置稍显不自然,改为“can only scan”更清晰。建议:can 后接动词原形;若想强调只能做快速浏览,用 scan 或 skim。