Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, cách dùng thì và danh từ số ít/số nhiều; sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn; dùng từ phù hợp và logic (ví dụ “genres” thay cho các từ rời rạc); rút gọn câu dài để tránh lỗi. Cụ thể: (1) Mở đầu một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I enjoy reading because...), (2) liệt kê thể loại sách bằng từ phù hợp và ngắt thành câu phụ với liên từ, (3) sửa thì để nhất quán (present simple) và dùng cấu trúc so sánh/khai triển ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and escape daily stress. I like several genres, such as life-improvement books, history, and self-help. Reading not only entertains me but also helps me learn new ideas and improve my thinking.

Sugerencia: Chú ý dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ 'fair' sai ngữ cảnh; 'experience' và 'contact' dùng sai). Cải thiện ngữ pháp như subject-verb agreement và mạo từ; kết hợp câu bằng liên từ hợp lý. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và ngắn gọn (comfort, less distraction, better retention).

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable for my eyes and I can concentrate better. Holding a physical book also gives me a pleasant tactile experience, and there are fewer distractions than on digital devices.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi động từ và danh từ (reading -> read; document -> documents; contract or exam interruption -> contracts or exam papers). Trình bày rõ hai tình huống: khi cần đọc kỹ (hợp đồng, tài liệu học tập) và khi không (tin tức nhanh, quảng cáo). Dùng linking words như 'for example' hoặc 'on the other hand' để mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm dealing with important documents, such as contracts or exam papers, because missing a detail could cause serious problems. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I'm skimming news headlines or short advertisements, since they usually don't require deep understanding.

Sugerencia: Sửa cấu trúc câu và từ vựng: 'I really prefer scanning' thay vì 'I can really prefer'; sửa cụm 'short from something online' thành 'short of time' hoặc 'looking something up online'. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể và dùng linking word 'for example' để rõ ràng. Giữ câu ngắn dưới 5 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer scanning when I need information quickly, for example during an exam or when I'm short of time. Scanning helps me focus on the main points and saves time, while I reserve detailed reading for understanding complex topics.

× reading is one of my favorite hobby

✓ reading is one of my favorite hobbies

'One of my' requires a plural noun after it. Use 'hobbies' to match plural form.

× because it allowed me to unwind and escape from daily stress

✓ because it allows me to unwind and escape from daily stress

Present simple 'allows' is needed because the student is describing a habitual effect of reading, not a past one.

× I enjoy employing different cleaner life, teaching history, self help and find that reading is not expanded by now but also improve my.

✓ I enjoy reading different genres like clean living, teaching history, and self-help, and I find that reading not only expands my knowledge but also improves me

Several issues: wrong preposition and verb choices. 'Employing' is incorrect for reading; use 'reading'. 'Cleaner life' likely 'clean living' or 'self-care'. Use 'like' to introduce examples. 'Not only... but also' structure should be used with parallel verbs: 'expands' and 'improves'. 'My' needs a noun (e.g., 'me' or 'my knowledge'). Verb tense should be present simple for habitual actions.

× I most prefer reading on paper.

✓ I prefer reading on paper the most

'Most prefer' is awkward; use 'prefer... the most' or simply 'I prefer reading on paper'. This is about correct word order rather than an article, but it fits under smoothing common phrasing errors.

× I find it fair, more comfortable for my eyes and I really enjoy the testing experience of holding a physical book or magazine.

✓ I find it far more comfortable for my eyes and I really enjoy the tactile experience of holding a physical book or magazine

'Fair' is incorrect here; likely 'far' to intensify 'more comfortable'. 'Testing experience' is wrong; 'tactile experience' describes touch. Use adverb 'far' for comparison and appropriate noun 'tactile'.

× Plus I can contact it better without the distraction that come with digital device.

✓ Plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that come with digital devices

'Contact' is incorrect; should be 'concentrate'. Use plural 'distractions' and 'devices'. 'Come' must agree with plural subject 'distractions'.

× I need to reading carefully when I am looking at important document like contract or exam interruption.

✓ I need to read carefully when I am looking at important documents like contracts or exam instructions

'Need to' must be followed by the base verb 'read', not the -ing form. Use plural 'documents' and 'contracts' and correct 'exam interruption' to 'exam instructions'.

× If I don't pay attention I might make a mistake or missing something important.

✓ If I don't pay attention I might make a mistake or miss something important

After modal 'might' use base verb 'miss', not gerund 'missing'. Keep verbs parallel and base-form after modal verbs.

× Also when I am study for school and to read carefully to understand everything.

✓ Also when I am studying for school I read carefully to understand everything

Use present continuous 'am studying' for ongoing activity. Remove extra 'to' before 'read' and use simple present 'read' to indicate habitual action in that context.

× I can really prefer scanning, especially when I need to find information quickly like during exam or when I am short from something online.

✓ I really prefer scanning, especially when I need to find information quickly during exams or when I am short on time online

'Can prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' expresses preference without 'can'. Use plural 'exams' and correct preposition 'short on time'. Remove unnecessary 'like'.

× It really help me focus on most important point and save a lot of time.

✓ It really helps me focus on the most important points and saves a lot of time

Subject-verb agreement: 'helps' and 'saves' for singular subject 'it'. Include definite article 'the' before 'most important points' and use plural 'points'.