Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give one brief reason and a specific example. Reduce fillers (umm, but) and avoid vague or confusing phrases.

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy reading long texts because they often confuse me. For example, long articles and multi-page books can be hard to follow, so I prefer comics, which have pictures and short dialogues that are easier to understand.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence, give two concise reasons linked by a linking word, and avoid hesitations. Add a short specific example to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can carry many books on my tablet and quickly search for words, which saves time compared with flipping through paper pages.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear general statement, then give contrasting situations with linking words (for example, 'especially' and 'however'). Provide a brief specific consequence to illustrate why careful reading matters and avoid trailing off.

Ejemplo: You need to read carefully in important situations, especially when signing a contract, because missing details could lead to financial loss. However, for casual messages or social posts, you can read more quickly since the consequences are minor.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons and an example. Remove filler words and make sentences more concise to improve fluency and coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand all the information and avoid missing important points. For example, when studying for exams I read texts thoroughly and take notes so I can remember key facts.

× To be honest, I don't really like reading UMM because I find that those long texts online many pages of the book really confuse me and I get all wronged by it.

✓ To be honest, I don't really like reading because I find that long online texts and many pages of a book really confuse me and I get all mixed up by them.

The original sentence has issues with word forms and sentence structure. 'Reading UMM' includes filler 'UMM' which should be omitted. 'Those long texts online many pages of the book' is a run-on and uses incorrect coordination; it should be 'long online texts and many pages of a book'. 'Get all wronged by it' uses incorrect verb phrase and pronoun: use 'get all mixed up by them' to agree with plural 'texts and pages'. Improve by removing fillers, connecting parallel nouns with 'and', using correct idiom 'get mixed up', and matching pronoun number. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× But what if I do like comics books, They are more.

✓ But I do like comic books; they are more enjoyable.

The original sentence is fragmentary and uses incorrect capitalization and word choice. 'Comics books' should be 'comic books'. 'They are more' is incomplete; it needs a complement like 'enjoyable' or 'interesting'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences and lowercase 'they'. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I prefer to read on screen because I think it is less, it is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I think it is more convenient.

The phrase 'it is less, it is more convenient' is contradictory and ungrammatical. Use 'more convenient' to compare reading on a screen with paper. Add the article 'a' before 'screen' for natural English. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× Umm, with paper I have to flip through those book pages and it's a little inconvenient.

✓ With paper, I have to flip through the pages of the book and it's a little inconvenient.

The phrase 'those book pages' is awkward; standard phrasing is 'the pages of the book' or 'book pages'. Move the comma after 'paper' for clarity. This corrects prepositional and noun order. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× And with a screen it is very easy.

✓ With a screen, it's very easy.

The original is repetitive and missing a contraction; shorten to 'With a screen, it's very easy.' Add a comma for clarity and use contraction for natural speech. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I think you need to read carefully, especially when you are signing a contract.

✓ I think you need to read carefully, especially when you sign a contract.

Use simple present 'sign' rather than present continuous 'are signing' for general statements about what one should do. The simple present is used for habitual or general truths. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× If you're not reading those contract pages properly, you could get umm scammed or even sign a contract that you would not like.

✓ If you don't read a contract's pages properly, you could be scammed or even sign a contract you don't like.

'Those contract pages' is awkward; 'a contract's pages' or 'the pages of a contract' is clearer. Use 'could be scammed' instead of 'get scammed' for formality and correct auxiliary usage. Replace 'would not like' with 'don't like' to match conditional style. Remove filler 'umm'. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× I prefer detailed reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading.

No grammatical change required; sentence is acceptable. However, for naturalness: 'I prefer to read in detail' or 'I prefer detailed reading' both work. No correction needed under the listed types. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× I generally like to read everything by uh, properly.

✓ I generally like to read everything properly.

Remove filler 'uh' and the incorrect insertion 'by' which breaks the verb phrase. Use 'read everything properly' for correct word order. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× I don't like to miss out any words or any information that I need to know.

✓ I don't like to miss any words or information that I need to know.

'Miss out any words' is nonstandard; use 'miss any words' or 'miss out on any information'. Avoid repeating 'any'. Streamline to 'miss any words or information'. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× I also like to note down everything, so I think that comes with the reading part.

✓ I also like to note down everything, so I think that goes with reading.

'Comes with the reading part' is awkward. Use 'goes with reading' or 'is part of reading' for natural phrasing. This corrects verb collocation and word choice. (Grammar problem type ID: 9)