Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, cú pháp và chọn từ chính xác hơn; tránh câu lặp và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi thì/hồi tưởng (“Once I was a child” → “When I was a child”), (2) danh từ số nhiều/đếm được (“literatures” → “literature” hoặc “Vietnamese literature”), (3) gộp thông tin để ngắn gọn và tự nhiên trong tối đa 5 câu. Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ phù hợp.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading very much. When I was a child I often read novels and Vietnamese literature, which sparked my interest in stories. Now I read both for pleasure and to relax after a long day, and I also find it helps me learn about different subjects.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn; tránh dịch sát từ tiếng Việt như “eye strength” và “carry many books on my”. Cụ thể: (1) đồng nhất thì (“it make” → “it makes”), (2) dùng collocation tự nhiên (“strain my eyes” thay vì “eye strength”), (3) hoàn thành câu (“carry many books on my” → “carry many books with me” hoặc “store many books on my device”). Dùng 2–3 câu tối đa, có câu chủ đề và lý do đối chiếu rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: It depends. If I've already spent a lot of time looking at screens, I prefer paper because it is easier on my eyes and less tiring. But for convenience I usually read on a screen since I can store and carry many books on my device.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện từ vựng chuyên ngành và ngữ pháp; sửa lỗi động từ và danh từ, sắp xếp ý rõ ràng. Cụ thể: (1) “suggest contracts or exam question” là không chính xác — dùng “such as contracts or exam questions”, (2) động từ số nhiều/ít (“it don't” → “they don't”), (3) dùng liên từ để contrast (“whereas” hoặc “but”) và tránh lặp từ “just”. Viết rõ tình huống cần đọc kỹ và tình huống chỉ skim với 2 câu ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I'm dealing with important documents, such as contracts or exam questions, because I must understand every detail and avoid mistakes. In contrast, I usually just skim casual messages or advertisements since they don't require deep understanding.

Sugerencia: Sửa câu rườm rà, ngữ pháp và từ vựng; loại bỏ các phần không cần thiết và dùng linking words. Cụ thể: (1) thay “such as contrast or is there a question” bằng “such as contracts or exam questions”, (2) bỏ từ thừa như “recently” trong ngữ cảnh không phù hợp, (3) dùng “however” hoặc “otherwise” đúng vị trí và đảm bảo chủ-động từ đầy đủ. Trả lời nên gồm 2 câu: câu chủ đề + câu giải thích tương phản.

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose: for important materials like contracts or exam questions I prefer detailed reading to make sure I don't miss anything. However, when I'm on social media or reading casual messages I usually scan the text quickly.

× Once I was a child, I often read novels and Vietnamese literatures.

✓ When I was a child, I often read novels and Vietnamese literature.

Use 'When I was a child' instead of 'Once I was a child' for natural phrasing. 'Literature' is an uncountable noun in this context, so use the singular form 'literature' rather than 'literatures'. Suggestion: Replace 'Once I was a child' with 'When I was a child' and use 'literature' (no -s).

× Reading helped me broaden my knowledge and relax after a long day at work.

✓ Reading helps me broaden my knowledge and relax after a long day at work.

The student mixed past tense 'helped' with a general truth about a habitual action. Use present simple 'helps' for habitual or general truths. Suggestion: Use present simple 'helps' to describe ongoing habitual effects.

× Actually it depends.

✓ Actually, it depends.

This is punctuation/phrasing; add a comma after 'Actually' for clarity and natural rhythm. Though not strictly a tense error, improving punctuation makes the sentence correct. Suggestion: Insert a comma after sentence-introducing adverbs like 'Actually'.

× If I have spent too much time on screen and it make my eyes feel tired, I prefer to read on paper because it's more comfortable for my eye and causes less eye strength.

✓ If I have spent too much time on screens and it makes my eyes feel tired, I prefer to read on paper because it's more comfortable for my eyes and causes less eye strain.

Several issues: 'on screen' should be plural or with an article: 'on screens'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it make' should be 'it makes'. 'My eye' should be 'my eyes' (plural) because both eyes are implied. 'Eye strength' is incorrect collocation; the correct term is 'eye strain'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns where appropriate ('screens', 'eyes'), fix verb agreement ('makes'), and use correct collocations ('eye strain').

× However, for convenience I often read on the screen because I can carry many books on my.

✓ However, for convenience I often read on a screen because I can carry many books on it.

Sentence has incorrect noun phrase and missing object: 'the screen' should be 'a screen' (general preference) and 'on my' is incomplete; the intended object is 'it' referring to the device/screen. Use 'on it'. Suggestion: Use 'a screen' for general statements and complete the prepositional phrase with the correct pronoun 'it'.

× Well, when I'm reading important documents, suggest contracts or exam question, I need to read carefully to understand the details and avoid mistakes.

✓ Well, when I'm reading important documents, such as contracts or exam questions, I need to read carefully to understand the details and avoid mistakes.

Use 'such as' not 'suggest' to introduce examples. 'Exam question' should be plural 'exam questions' to match 'documents'. Suggestion: Replace 'suggest' with 'such as' and pluralize 'exam questions'.

× However, when I read casual message or advertisement, I just skim because it's just for fun and it don't require deep understanding.

✓ However, when I read casual messages or advertisements, I just skim because it's just for fun and they don't require deep understanding.

'Message' and 'advertisement' should be plural to match the general context. Subject-verb agreement: 'it don't' is incorrect; use 'they don't' to agree with plural subjects. Also 'casual messages or advertisements' is more natural. Suggestion: Make nouns plural and match verb form: 'messages/advertisements' and 'they don't'.

× Actually it depends when I read important documents such as contrast or is there a question, I prefer recently to understand the details and avoid mistakes.

✓ Actually, it depends. When I read important documents such as contracts or when there is an exam question, I prefer to read carefully to understand the details and avoid mistakes.

Multiple errors: punctuation and sentence boundaries ('Actually it depends' should be followed by a full stop). 'Contrast' should be 'contracts'. 'Is there a question' is worded incorrectly; use 'when there is an exam question'. 'I prefer recently' is incorrect; use 'I prefer to read carefully'. Suggestion: Split into two sentences, correct 'contracts', use 'when there is an exam question', and replace 'prefer recently' with 'prefer to read carefully'.

× Otherwise when I browse the social media or read casual message I just skim.

✓ Otherwise, when I browse social media or read casual messages, I just skim.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before 'social media' when speaking generally. Pluralize 'message' to 'messages'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'social media' (no 'the') and plural 'messages', and include commas for readability.