Part 1
Examinador
Do you like reading?
Candidato
Yes, I'm really into reading. It can help me feel more relaxed after a busy day and I think I can learn a lot of new things from books. I usually read books before I go to the bed or when I'm on subway.
Examinador
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Candidato
I prefer read on screen because it's more convenient for me and I can carry lots of books on my phones and it can look the information quickly. Also I can. Made make the text bigger if I want.
Examinador
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Candidato
Well, I need to read very carefully when the information is very important such as examine instructions and academic papers or study related emails but follows things the social media or news are usually just. To get the main idea.
Examinador
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Candidato
It really depends on when I read the important information for such as the exam instructions over academic papers and the study related emails, I prefer to read it very carefully but for the social media and news. The scan and to get room an ideal.
Do you like reading?
Puntuación: 82.0Sugerencia: 总体不错,回答自然且直接,但可以精简并更具体。注意语法和搭配(如“go to bed”,“on the subway”),避免冗长重复。可以用一两句补充具体类型或最近读的书,使用连接词使信息更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me relax after a busy day, and I often learn new things from books. For example, I usually read psychology articles or short novels before I go to bed or while I'm on the subway.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 句子结构和语法错误较多,影响流畅性。要注意动词形式(如“I prefer to read”),句子需连贯,避免断句错误。补充一个具体优点或缺点对比(比如眼睛疲劳或纸质书的触感),并使用连接词(for example, however)。
Ejemplo: I prefer to read on a screen because it's more convenient — I can carry many books on my phone and search for information quickly. However, screens can strain my eyes more than paper, so I sometimes switch to a paperback for long reading sessions.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
Puntuación: 64.0Sugerencia: 回答表意清晰但表达混乱,有语法和词汇使用错误(如“examine instructions”应为“exam instructions”),句子断裂导致不连贯。应先给主题句,然后用连接词分两部分说明,举具体例子并简洁总结。
Ejemplo: I read carefully when the information is important, for example exam instructions, academic papers, or study-related emails. On the other hand, I usually skim social media posts and news articles to get the main idea quickly.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答重复前一题内容且语法混乱,句子冗长且有词序错误(如“the scan and to get room an ideal”无意义)。应直接回答偏好并用一两句说明原因,使用清晰的连接词并提供具体例子。
Ejemplo: It depends — for important texts like exam instructions, academic papers, or official emails I prefer detailed reading to avoid mistakes. For informal content such as social media or news, I usually scan to grasp the main points quickly.
× I usually read books before I go to the bed or when I'm on subway.
✓ I usually read books before I go to bed or when I'm on the subway.
句中错误为介词短语使用和冠词问题,但主要可归为动词后接-ing形式相关环境(习惯性动作)。更正说明:固定表达是 "go to bed"(不加冠词);表示乘坐地铁应为 "on the subway"。建议记住常用搭配:"go to bed" 和 "on the subway"。
× I prefer read on screen because it's more convenient for me and I can carry lots of books on my phones and it can look the information quickly.
✓ I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient for me and I can carry lots of books on my phone and it allows me to look up information quickly.
动词 'prefer' 后通常接动名词(-ing)或不定式,两者常见但更自然的是 'prefer doing' 或 'prefer to do'。此外存在冠词和名词单复数错误:'a screen';'phone' 单数;短语应为 'look up information' 而不是 'look the information';最后用 'it allows me' 更清晰。建议:'prefer' 后用 -ing 或 to do,注意固定搭配 'look up'。
× Also I can. Made make the text bigger if I want.
✓ Also I can make the text bigger if I want.
原句存在断句和动词形式错误,'Made make' 是错误拼写/多余词。正确结构为主语 + 助动词 + 动词原形:'I can make'。建议注意完整句子结构和不要重复或拼写错误的词。
× Well, I need to read very carefully when the information is very important such as examine instructions and academic papers or study related emails but follows things the social media or news are usually just. To get the main idea.
✓ Well, I need to read very carefully when the information is very important, such as exam instructions, academic papers, or study-related emails, but things on social media or the news are usually just to get the main idea.
原句结构混乱,有词序、词形和短语连接错误。'examine instructions' 应为 'exam instructions';'study related' 应加连字符或改为 'study-related';'follows things the social media' 无意义,应为 'things on social media';句尾断句错误,完整表达应为 'are usually just to get the main idea'。建议理清主句和并列短语,使用正确名词形式和介词。
× It really depends on when I read the important information for such as the exam instructions over academic papers and the study related emails, I prefer to read it very carefully but for the social media and news. The scan and to get room an ideal.
✓ It really depends. When I read important information, such as exam instructions, academic papers, or study-related emails, I prefer to read it very carefully, but for social media and the news I just scan to get the main idea.
原句存在句子结构问题、动名词使用及词序和搭配错误。'depends on when I read' 用法可分句表达更清楚;'study related' 应为 'study-related';'The scan and to get room an ideal' 完全不合语法,应为 'I just scan to get the main idea'。建议拆分句子,使用并列短语列举,保持动词形式一致并使用固定搭配 'scan to get the main idea'。