Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên hơn, ngắn gọn và chính xác về ngữ pháp; tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: 'creating' hai lần) và sửa lỗi từ vựng ('vessel' sai nghĩa, 'are explain' sai ngữ pháp). Thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể và một liên từ để chuyển ý mượt mà hơn. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Ejemplo: I don't read much because I prefer making short films and videos, which I find more enjoyable. For example, I often watch silent documentaries since they convey ideas through striking images and sound. Because of this visual format, I usually learn faster from videos than from books.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và đại từ (không dùng 'your screen'); sửa số nhiều/ít ('digital devices are'). Tránh so sánh quá thô ('the real books cannot do it')—nên nói cụ thể hơn. Dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, một liên kết lý do và một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ 2-3 câu.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because digital devices are more portable and can store many books. For example, I read on my Kindle or tablet and I can easily adjust the font size, which makes reading much more comfortable than with paper books.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và liên quan, nhưng có thể tự nhiên hơn bằng cách thêm một liên từ/chuyển ý (ví dụ 'however' cho phần khi không cần đọc kỹ) và một ví dụ ngắn về khi không cần đọc kỹ. Giữ cấu trúc chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when I want to identify key information in a long essay or article, such as during the IELTS reading test when I must understand main ideas to answer questions accurately. However, I don't read as carefully when I'm browsing news or social media; there I usually just scan headlines for general information.

Sugerencia: Sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp và từ vựng ('absorb and certain accurate information' -> 'absorb and obtain accurate information'; 'help' -> 'helps'). Nên nêu rõ chủ đề câu trả lời, lý do, và một ví dụ ngắn. Hạn chế lặp ý.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading to scanning because I want to absorb information and ensure it is accurate. For example, when I study articles for a class, reading carefully helps me understand the main ideas and remember important details.

× I'm not very interested in reading because I prefer creating films and creating short videos that are more enjoyable for me and I can get information vessel from videos rather than from books.

✓ I'm not very interested in reading because I prefer creating films and short videos that are more enjoyable for me and I can get information from videos rather than from books.

Student used 'creating films and creating short videos' which is repetitive; reduce to 'creating films and short videos'. 'Information vessel' is incorrect collocation; correct word is 'information'. Also keep gerund forms 'creating' consistent. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct collocations.

× For example, I like watching silent documentaries because they are explain ideas with image and sound, which makes them more interesting.

✓ For example, I like watching silent documentaries because they explain ideas with images and sound, which makes them more interesting.

The student wrote 'they are explain' which mixes passive auxiliary with base verb; correct is 'they explain' (active). 'Image' should be plural 'images' to match plural noun 'ideas' and general usage. Advice: use correct verb form after subject and match noun number.

× I prefer reading on your screen rather than on paper because digital device are more portable and can store many books.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen rather than on paper because digital devices are more portable and can store many books.

The student used 'your screen' which is inappropriate when speaking about personal preference; use 'a screen' or 'the screen'. 'Digital device are' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong number: should be plural 'devices are'. Suggestion: use appropriate possessive or article and ensure noun-verb agreement.

× For example, I can read on the Kindle or a tablet and adjust the font size which makes reading more comfortable and the real books cannot do it.

✓ For example, I can read on a Kindle or a tablet and adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable; real books cannot do that.

Use 'a Kindle' (indefinite article) and 'real books cannot do that'—avoid 'do it' for clarity. Also add comma before which clause. 'Real books' is fine but 'do it' is informal and unclear; use 'do that'. Suggestion: add articles where needed and use clear pronouns.

× I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because I want to absorb and certain accurate information.

✓ I prefer detailed reading rather than scanning because I want to absorb certain accurate information.

The phrase 'absorb and certain accurate information' incorrectly includes 'and'. Remove 'and' to join verb 'absorb' with its object. Also 'certain accurate information' is slightly awkward; consider 'accurate information' or 'certain pieces of accurate information'. Suggestion: omit unnecessary conjunctions and choose clearer noun phrases.

× For example, when I read articles for study, reading carefully help me fully understand the main ideas and also some important details.

✓ For example, when I read articles for study, reading carefully helps me fully understand the main ideas and also some important details.

Subject 'reading carefully' is singular gerund phrase, so the verb must be 'helps' not 'help' (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with gerund subjects.