Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but has some grammar and phrasing errors, slight redundancy, and is a little long. Improve by using a concise topic sentence, correct verb forms and article use, and one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love reading, especially fantasy novels. For example, I enjoy Harry Potter and The Hunger Games because they immerse me in imaginative worlds and inspire my creativity.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear reasons, but watch grammar (word order, articles, plural/singular) and be slightly more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence and then give two brief, specific reasons with linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen. Firstly, e-books are more convenient and often cheaper than printed books. Secondly, e-readers let me adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable.

Sugerencia: The response addresses both parts but has grammatical errors, incomplete sentences, and vague wording. Improve by using correct word forms (deadlines, former→old/past), completing the second clause, and adding a linking contrast word like “whereas” or “but”. Keep it to two short sentences.

Ejemplo: I read official emails very carefully because they often contain important details about work, bills, or deadlines. By contrast, I skim messages from friends and social media because they usually have informal updates and less important information.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has multiple grammar mistakes, unclear phrases, and contradictions. Clarify whether you prefer skimming; correct verb forms and articles; remove the contradictory sentence or rephrase it to explain exceptions. Use one linking phrase for an exception.

Ejemplo: I prefer skimming, because most social media posts are short and lack detailed information. However, if a post contains important or official information, I will read it more carefully.

× Absolutely yes. I'm really keen on reading a book, especially fantasy books like Harry Potter and the Hunger Game, because it makes me feel living a fantasy world, so it makes me feel more creative.

✓ Absolutely. I'm really keen on reading books, especially fantasy books like Harry Potter and The Hunger Games, because they make me feel as if I'm living in a fantasy world, and they make me feel more creative.

Errors: incorrect article usage and singular/plural agreement. 'reading a book' is awkward when speaking generally; use 'reading books'. 'the Hunger Game' should be 'The Hunger Games' (title). Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'books'. Missing words and incorrect structure: 'feel living a fantasy world' should be 'feel as if I'm living in a fantasy world'. Suggestion: when speaking generally use plural nouns and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents; include necessary prepositions and linking phrases like 'as if' and 'in'.

× I would say I prefer reading on a screen books because it is more convenient and cheaper than paper books. Also ebook can adjust the font size which makes reading more comfortable.

✓ I would say I prefer reading on-screen books because they are more convenient and cheaper than paper books. Also, e-books can adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable.

Errors: article/quantifier and subject-verb agreement. 'reading on a screen books' word order is wrong; use 'reading on-screen books' or 'reading on a screen'. 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'books'. 'ebook' should be hyphenated 'e-books' and takes plural 'can'. Suggestion: keep noun-adjective order and ensure subject and verb agree in number; hyphenate or standardize compound nouns like 'e-books'.

× I usually read official emails very carefully because they often include important details about my work, bills or deadline.

✓ I usually read official emails very carefully because they often include important details about my work, bills, or deadlines.

Errors: incorrect or missing plural form and punctuation. 'deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' when mentioned generally and needs a comma before 'or' in a list. Suggestion: use plural forms for general categories and include proper list punctuation.

× However, I usually skim in former message from friends or social media posts since they contain.

✓ However, I usually skim former messages from friends or social media posts since they don't usually contain important information.

Errors: incomplete sentence and incorrect adjective order. 'former message' is wrong; use 'messages' or 'previous messages'. The sentence ends abruptly 'since they contain.' which is incomplete. Suggestion: complete the clause with the intended object (e.g., 'important information') and use plural nouns for general statements.

× I prefer skimming because I usually read the short post on social media like Instagram and Facebook which don't have detailed information and.

✓ I prefer skimming because I usually read short posts on social media like Instagram and Facebook, which don't have detailed information.

Errors: noun number and dangling conjunction. Use plural 'posts' to match 'don't'. Remove the trailing 'and.' which leaves the sentence unfinished. Suggestion: ensure plurality agreement between subject and verb and avoid leaving conjunctions without continuation.

× This post has a crucial information so I don't lead up as closely.

✓ This post doesn't have crucial information, so I don't read it as closely.

Errors: article usage, verb choice, and word order. 'a crucial information' is wrong because 'information' is uncountable and doesn't take 'a'; use 'crucial information' or 'a crucial piece of information'. 'lead up' is incorrect verb choice; should be 'read it' and word order 'read it as closely' or 'read it closely'. Suggestion: remember uncountable nouns don't take 'a' and choose correct verbs for the action (read), and use natural adverb placement 'read it closely'.