Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition and correct small grammar errors; make the reply more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Watch for articles and verb forms (e.g., “a favorite hobby” → “a favorite hobbies” or better “one of my favorite hobbies” and remove duplicate words).

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy reading. It helps me unwind after a busy day, and I especially like exploring different genres such as science fiction and history because they offer both imaginative storytelling and interesting facts.

Sugerencia: Fix word order and small grammar mistakes, and avoid redundant phrases. Provide one clear reason, then a brief supporting detail connected with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes and helps me concentrate. For example, printed books don’t have notifications, so I can focus longer without interruptions.

Sugerencia: Eliminate hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., “I’m” not “I I'm”; “emails” plural; “a mistake” not “being mistake”). Answer directly, give a concise example, and use a linking word to explain consequence (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as contracts or official emails, because missing a small detail could cause serious problems like legal misunderstandings.

Sugerencia: Good clear response—just tighten phrasing and avoid mixing tenses. State preference clearly, then give a specific situation and a linking word to explain benefit. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer scanning when I need information quickly, for instance during exams or while searching online, because it helps me save time and locate key facts faster.

× Absolutely, reading is one of my favorite hobby because it allows me unwind and escape from my daily stress.

✓ Absolutely, reading is one of my favorite hobbies because it allows me to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

'favorite hobby' should be plural 'favorite hobbies' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also missing 'to' before 'unwind' to form the infinitive 'to unwind'. Suggestion: use 'one of my favorite hobbies' and 'allows me to unwind'.

× I enjoy exploring different genres like like sci-fi and history.

✓ I enjoy exploring different genres like sci-fi and history.

There is a duplicated word 'like like'. Remove the repetition. The gerund 'exploring' is correct. Suggestion: proofread to avoid repeated words.

× Personally I much prefer reading on paper.

✓ Personally, I much prefer reading on paper.

A comma is needed after 'Personally' for correct sentence flow and natural spoken English. The tense is correct; this fixes punctuation which affects clarity. Suggestion: add a comma after introductory adverbs.

× I find it for more comfortable for my eye, plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that comes from comes with digital devices.

✓ I find it much more comfortable for my eyes, plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that come with digital devices.

Use 'much more comfortable' instead of 'for more comfortable'; 'my eye' should be plural 'my eyes' for natural expression. 'That comes from comes with' has duplication and wrong verb form; use 'that come with' because 'distractions' is plural, so verb must be plural. Suggestion: 'I find it much more comfortable for my eyes' and 'distractions that come with digital devices'.

× I find it for more comfortable for my eye, plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that comes from comes with digital devices.

✓ I find it much more comfortable for my eyes, plus I can concentrate better without the distractions that come with digital devices.

As above, 'distractions' is plural so the verb must be 'come' not 'comes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement for third person plural subjects. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs.

× I definitely need to read carefully, especially when I I'm dealing with important documents such as contracts or official e-mail.

✓ I definitely need to read carefully, especially when I'm dealing with important documents such as contracts or official e-mails.

Remove the duplicated 'I' ('I I'm'). Use the contraction 'I'm' correctly. 'e-mail' is often pluralized as 'e-mails' when referring to multiple messages. Suggestion: 'especially when I'm dealing with important documents such as contracts or official e-mails'.

× Uh, missing even a small detail in this situation could lead to being mistake.

✓ Uh, missing even a small detail in this situation could lead to a mistake.

The phrase 'lead to being mistake' is ungrammatical. Use 'lead to a mistake' or 'lead to mistakes'. 'Lead to' should be followed by a noun. Suggestion: 'could lead to a mistake' or 'could lead to mistakes'.

× I generally prefer to use scanning when I need to find information quickly, especially during exams or I'm searching for something online.

✓ I generally prefer to use scanning when I need to find information quickly, especially during exams or when I'm searching for something online.

Parallel structure is required: 'especially during exams or when I'm searching...' The original mixes 'during exams' with 'I'm searching' without a connector. Add 'when' for clarity and parallelism. Suggestion: maintain parallel grammatical forms after 'especially'.