Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsın ve birkaç hobi örneği vermişsin. Ancak “I like take photos” yerine “I like taking photos” demelisin. Hobileri sıralarken tekrarı azaltıp doğal bir bağlaç kullan; örneğin “as well as” ile iki ek hobiyi birleştirebilirsin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies. I play tennis, and I also enjoy drawing and taking photos in my free time.

Sugerencia: Çocukken yaptığın etkinlik ile bugün yaptığın etkinliği ayırarak anlatmalısın. “I used to play volleyball” doğru bir başlangıç; ancak devamındaki “playing with barbies” ve “parisma” ifadeleri anlaşılmıyor. Net bir örnek ver ve “but” ile karşılaştırma yap. Cevabını iki kısa cümleyle sınırlayabilirsin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to play volleyball when I was a child. These days, I play tennis instead, and I really enjoy it.

Sugerencia: “No” cevabından sonra nedenini daha açık ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru biçimde açıklamalısın. “I prefer to everything” doğal bir ifade değil; tek bir hobiyi sürdürmek yerine farklı şeyler denemeyi sevdiğini söyleyebilirsin. “Because” öncesinde noktalama kullan ve fikrini kısa bir örnekle destekle.

Ejemplo: No, I haven’t had one hobby since childhood. I enjoy trying different activities, so my interests have changed over time.

Sugerencia: Ailenle ortak hobini açıkça belirtmişsin; ancak annenin hobisini anlatan bölüm anlaşılmıyor. “My mum is interested in…” yapısını kullanabilirsin. Ayrıca “we talk about always” yerine “we often talk about” demelisin. Bir ortak hobi ve ailece yaptığınız bir etkinlik hakkında net bir ayrıntı ekle.

Ejemplo: Yes, my dad and I both play tennis. My mum enjoys taking pictures, and we often talk about our hobbies together.

× Yes, I have a lot of hobbies. For example, I play tennis and I like drawing pictures and I like take photos.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of hobbies. For example, I play tennis, I like drawing pictures, and I like taking photos.

After like, you can use a gerund (a verb ending in -ing). Change take to taking to make it parallel with drawing.

× Yes, I used to play volleyball but today I play tennis and I really enjoy it playing with barbies but also I'm not playing parisma.

✓ Yes, I used to play volleyball, but today I play tennis, and I really enjoy playing with Barbies, but I'm also not playing parisma.

The pronoun it is unnecessary and incorrectly placed after enjoy. Use enjoy + a gerund, as in enjoy playing. Place also before the verb phrase it modifies: I'm also not playing.

× No because I don't choose one thing I prefer to everything

✓ No, because I don't choose one thing; I prefer everything.

Prefer takes a direct object when you say what you like more: prefer everything. To can be used in a comparison, as in prefer one thing to another, but it should not be placed before the direct object here.

× Yes, my dad plays tennis and my mum interesting on driving pictures and we talk about always our hobbies because he dare things.

✓ Yes, my dad plays tennis, and my mum is interested in driving pictures. We talk about our hobbies because he dare things.

The clause about your mum is missing the verb is. Use is interested to form a complete clause. The wording driving pictures is retained because changing it would be a vocabulary correction, not a grammar correction.

× Yes, my dad plays tennis and my mum interesting on driving pictures and we talk about always our hobbies because he dare things.

✓ Yes, my dad plays tennis, and my mum is interested in driving pictures. We talk about our hobbies because he dare things.

The adjective interested is followed by in, not on. Use interested in before the activity or thing that someone likes.

× Yes, my dad plays tennis and my mum interesting on driving pictures and we talk about always our hobbies because he dare things.

✓ Yes, my dad plays tennis, and my mum is interested in driving pictures. We always talk about our hobbies because he dare things.

Always usually goes before the main verb. Say we always talk, not we talk about always.

× Yes, my dad plays tennis and my mum interesting on driving pictures and we talk about always our hobbies because he dare things.

✓ Yes, my dad plays tennis, and my mum is interested in driving pictures. We talk about our hobbies because he dares things.

In the present simple, a verb used with he, she, or it usually takes -s or -es. Change dare to dares. The intended meaning of this clause is unclear, so only the verb form has been corrected.