Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接，内容具体，也使用了“but”和“because”来补充细节，整体较自然。主要问题是“It's just a hobby in my job”表达不正确，应改为“It's just a hobby, not my job”或“It's not related to my job”。“in water color”应改为“in watercolour”或“with watercolours”。此外，“improve my observation”不够自然，可以说“improve my powers of observation”。建议减少不必要的转折，并使用更准确的搭配。

Ejemplo: Yes, I love drawing. It’s just a hobby, not my job, so I’m still developing my skills. I usually sketch landscapes and sometimes portraits with watercolours at the weekend because drawing helps me relax and improves my powers of observation.

Sugerencia: 回答有清晰的时间对比，并提供了练习时长和具体活动，内容较丰富。语法上，“copy”应与“practicing”保持一致，改为“copying”；“copy pictures around the books”表达不自然，应改为“copy pictures from books”。“draw for six hours a day”可能显得过于夸张，如果不是准确事实，可以改为“spend several hours a day drawing”。建议补充一个结果或感受，使答案更完整。

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to love drawing when I was a child, and I seemed to have a natural talent for it. I would spend several hours a day practising different styles and copying pictures from books. As a result, drawing became my favourite way to spend my free time.

Sugerencia: 答案主题明确，也说明了阅读的类型、益处以及与职业的联系，但最后一句明显没有说完，影响表达的完整性和流利度。应将“since childhoods”改为“since childhood”，“broaden my view and my imagination”改为“broaden my horizons and stimulate my imagination”。“which helped”指代和时态不够清楚，可以拆成两个句子；“non fiction”应写作“non-fiction”。建议控制在3—4句，并以完整句子结束。

Ejemplo: Yes, I’ve loved reading since childhood. I enjoy novels, poetry and non-fiction because they broaden my horizons and stimulate my imagination. Reading has also helped me learn about different cultures, and now that I’m a literature teacher, it is both a hobby and an important part of my job.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确对比，也提供了自己和父母的具体爱好，内容符合题目要求。第一句应改为“I don’t have the same hobbies as my parents”或“My parents and I don’t have many hobbies in common”。“We sure them interests”有多处错误：应为“My friends and I share an interest in fitness and reading”；另外，前文说“reading”，后文说“novels”，最好保持一致。建议加入“However”或“As a result”等连接词，让对比关系更清晰，并修正标点。

Ejemplo: Not really. My parents and I don’t have many hobbies in common. I enjoy reading novels and working out at the gym with my friends, whereas my parents prefer cooking and trying new recipes. As a result, we usually spend our free time in quite different ways.

× Yes, I love drawing. It's just a hobby in my job so I'm not very skilled yet, but I usually sketch landscapes and sometimes portraits in water color on weekends because it helps me relax and improve my observation.

✓ Yes, I love drawing. It's just a hobby outside my job, so I'm not very skilled yet, but I usually sketch landscapes and sometimes portraits in watercolor on weekends because it helps me relax and improve my observation.

“in my job”表示“在我的工作里面”，这里想表达的是“工作之外的爱好”，所以应使用介词“outside”。另外，“watercolor”通常写成一个词，但这属于拼写问题，不属于本题指定的语法类型。

× I used to love drawing when I was a child and seemed to have a natural talent for it. I would draw for six hours a day, practicing different styles and copy pictures around the books.

✓ I used to love drawing when I was a child and seemed to have a natural talent for it. I would draw for six hours a day, practicing different styles and copying pictures from books.

“copy pictures around the books”中的“around”使用错误。表达“从书中临摹图片”时，应使用介词“from”。同时，前面使用了现在分词“practicing”，后面应保持平行结构，使用“copying”；这一修改涉及动词-ing形式。

× I used to love drawing when I was a child and seemed to have a natural talent for it. I would draw for six hours a day, practicing different styles and copy pictures around the books.

✓ I used to love drawing when I was a child and seemed to have a natural talent for it. I would draw for six hours a day, practicing different styles and copying pictures from books.

“practicing”和“copy”由“and”连接，应该保持相同的形式。因为“practicing”是现在分词，所以“copy”应改为“copying”，形成平行结构。

× I have loved reading since childhoods. I enjoyed novels, poetry and non fiction books because they broaden my view and my imagination which helped me learn more about different cultures and now I am a literature teacher in China which makes reading both my hobby and part of my

✓ I have loved reading since childhood. I enjoyed novels, poetry, and nonfiction books because they broaden my view and imagination, which helps me learn more about different cultures, and now I am a literature teacher in China, which makes reading both my hobby and part of my job.

“childhood”表示一个人生阶段，通常是不可数名词，不能使用复数形式“childhoods”。因此应改为“since childhood”。

× I have loved reading since childhoods. I enjoyed novels, poetry and non fiction books because they broaden my view and my imagination which helped me learn more about different cultures and now I am a literature teacher in China which makes reading both my hobby and part of my

✓ I have loved reading since childhood. I enjoyed novels, poetry, and nonfiction books because they broaden my view and imagination, which helps me learn more about different cultures, and now I am a literature teacher in China, which makes reading both my hobby and part of my job.

句子最后的“part of my”后面缺少名词，导致句子没有完整结束。应补充“job”，构成“part of my job”。同时，较长的句子需要使用逗号分隔不同的从句，使结构更清晰。

× I don't have as same hobbies as my parents. I usually enjoy reading and working out at the gym with my friends. We sure them interests in fitness and novels. My parents prefer cooking and trying new recipes so our free time activities are quite different.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my parents. I usually enjoy reading and working out at the gym with my friends. We share the same interests in fitness and novels. My parents prefer cooking and trying new recipes, so our free-time activities are quite different.

固定结构是“have the same ... as ...”，所以“same”前面必须使用定冠词“the”。不能说“as same hobbies”。

× I don't have as same hobbies as my parents. I usually enjoy reading and working out at the gym with my friends. We sure them interests in fitness and novels. My parents prefer cooking and trying new recipes so our free time activities are quite different.

✓ I don't have the same hobbies as my parents. I usually enjoy reading and working out at the gym with my friends. We share the same interests in fitness and novels. My parents prefer cooking and trying new recipes, so our free-time activities are quite different.

“them”是宾格代词，不能放在名词“interests”前面作限定词。这里应使用“the same interests”。另外，表达“有相同的兴趣”应使用动词“share”，而不是“sure”。