Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsınız; ancak cevapta aynı yapı (“I love...”) tekrarlanıyor ve “maybe going to fishing” ile “normal peoples have hobbies” ifadeleri doğal değil. “Go fishing” ve “most people” gibi doğru ifadeleri kullanın. En fazla iki veya üç hobiden bahsedip bir tanesini kısa bir nedenle veya örnekle açıklayın. Ayrıca fikir cümleniz soruyla doğrudan ilişkili olmadığı için çıkarılabilir.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a few hobbies, especially playing football, cycling, and fishing. I usually play football with my friends at the weekend because it helps me stay fit. I also enjoy fishing with my family when I have free time.

Sugerencia: Geçmiş deneyimlerden bahsettiğiniz için “I have” yerine “I had” ve “I love” yerine “I loved” kullanmalısınız. “I love talk” yerine “I loved talking” veya “I enjoyed talking” demek gerekir. Aynı “when I was a child” ifadesini tekrarlamayın; hobilerinizi belirtip babanızla balık tutmak gibi spesifik bir ayrıntı ekleyin. Cevabınızı iki veya üç bağlantılı cümleyle tamamlayın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had several hobbies when I was a child. I particularly enjoyed fishing with my dad because we could spend quality time together. I also liked talking to my mum and playing outside with my friends.

Sugerencia: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır; fakat zaman yapıları ve cümle kuruluşu hatalı. “I have loved football since childhood” veya “I have been playing football since I was a child” yapılarını kullanın. “Football is my whole life” biraz abartılı ve doğal olmayan bir ifade olabilir; bunun yerine futbolun sizin için neden önemli olduğunu açıklayın. Geçmiş ve günümüzü karşılaştırırken “When I was a child...” ve “Nowadays...” bağlaçlarını kullanın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have played football since I was a child. I started playing when I was about six, and I still play regularly with my friends. Nowadays, football is one of the most important parts of my life because it keeps me active and helps me relax.

Sugerencia: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamanız olumlu; ancak “different for my hobbies” yerine “different from mine”, “similar me” yerine “similar to me” kullanmalısınız. “My mum hates my hobbies” ifadesi güçlü ve biraz belirsiz; annenizin hobilerinizi paylaşmadığını veya ilgi duymadığını söylemek daha doğal olur. Aile üyelerinizi karşılaştırırken “whereas” veya “but” gibi bağlaçlar kullanın ve her biri için kısa, spesifik bir hobi örneği verin.

Ejemplo: No, we do not have exactly the same hobbies. My dad enjoys gardening, whereas I prefer playing football and cycling. My mum is not really interested in sports, but my brother and I both enjoy playing video games.

× Yes, I have many hobbies. I love playing football, I love riding a bike, maybe going to fishing And normal peoples have hobbies in my opinion, absolutely.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies. I love playing football, I love riding a bike, and I enjoy going fishing. In my opinion, normal people have hobbies too.

The expression is go fishing, not go to fishing. The verb go is followed directly by the -ing activity when talking about recreational activities.

× Yes, I have many hobbies. I love playing football, I love riding a bike, maybe going to fishing And normal peoples have hobbies in my opinion, absolutely.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies. I love playing football, I love riding a bike, and I enjoy going fishing. In my opinion, normal people have hobbies too.

People is already the plural form of person, so it does not take an additional -s. Peoples is used only when referring to different ethnic or national groups.

× Yes, I have many hobbies. I love playing football, I love riding a bike, maybe going to fishing And normal peoples have hobbies in my opinion, absolutely.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies. I love playing football, I love riding a bike, and I enjoy going fishing. In my opinion, normal people have hobbies too.

Several independent ideas were joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunctions. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use and to connect closely related activities.

× When I was a child I have many hobbies, of course I I love going to fishing with my dad when I was a child. I love talk with my mum

✓ When I was a child, I had many hobbies. Of course, I loved going fishing with my dad, and I loved talking with my mum.

The question asks about childhood, so past tense is required. Use had, loved, and loved instead of the present forms have and love.

× When I was a child I have many hobbies, of course I I love going to fishing with my dad when I was a child. I love talk with my mum

✓ When I was a child, I had many hobbies. Of course, I loved going fishing with my dad, and I loved talking with my mum.

The correct expression is go fishing, without the preposition to. Use this fixed expression when describing the activity.

× When I was a child I have many hobbies, of course I I love going to fishing with my dad when I was a child. I love talk with my mum

✓ When I was a child, I had many hobbies. Of course, I loved going fishing with my dad, and I loved talking with my mum.

The verb love is followed by a gerund when describing an activity. Therefore, use loved talking, not love talk.

× Yes, I love football since my childhood to today, the football is my whole life.

✓ Yes, I have loved football since childhood. Football is my whole life.

An action that began in the past and continues to the present is expressed with the present perfect. Use have loved with since, not the simple present love.

× Yes, I love football since my childhood to today, the football is my whole life.

✓ Yes, I have loved football since childhood. Football is my whole life.

Since childhood already indicates the starting point and does not need the additional phrase to today. Use since childhood or from childhood until today.

× Yes, I love football since my childhood to today, the football is my whole life.

✓ Yes, I have loved football since childhood. Football is my whole life.

Football is generally used without the definite article when referring to the sport in general. The football usually means a specific ball.

× When I was a child I play football and to day I am football I've played football too.

✓ When I was a child, I played football, and today I still play it. I have played football for many years.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed past period, so use the past-tense form played instead of play.

× When I was a child I play football and to day I am football I've played football too.

✓ When I was a child, I played football, and today I still play it. I have played football for many years.

I am football is not a complete or meaningful grammatical expression. Use I still play it to express that the activity continues, and organize the ideas into separate complete sentences.

× No, absolutely not because my dad's hobbies are very different for my hobbies.

✓ No, absolutely not, because my dad's hobbies are very different from my hobbies.

The adjective different is followed by the preposition from, not for, when comparing two things.

× My brother is similar me.

✓ My brother is similar to me.

The adjective similar is followed by the preposition to. The correct structure is similar to someone or something.