Hobby— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you have any hobbies?
Candidato
Absolutely, I have many hobbies, one of them is studying. I enjoy learning English and discovering new things, and I usually spend a hour each day practicing with apps and reading articles.
Examinador
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Candidato
When I was a child I had a lot of free time. So my parents enrolled me in swimming lessons. Swimming became one of my favorite hobbies and I practicing it for about ten years because I joined training and taking part in competitions.
Examinador
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Candidato
Yes, of course I I have had a hobby of reading since my childhood because it helped me escape into different worlds I used to read a lot of novels, for example, Robin Hood is one of the my favorite and I still will enjoy reading her grudy nowadays.
Examinador
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Candidato
Absolutely, when I was a child, my father and I often went cycling together in the park. It was a fun hobby and a great way for us to spend time and bond.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you have any hobbies?
Puntuación: 72.0Sugerencia: Ответ звучит естественно, но есть ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении и небольшая избыточность. Улучшите точность артиклей и времен, используйте более краткое связное предложение (максимум 3–4 предложения), и добавьте конкретный пример, чтобы обосновать утверждение. Например: исправить "a hour" на "an hour", убрать повтор "one of them is studying" и связать идеи словами типа "for example".
Ejemplo: Yes, I have several hobbies, and one of my main interests is studying. For example, I study English and explore new topics online, and I spend about an hour each day using apps and reading articles.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: Хорошая идея и содержание, но есть ошибки в грамматике (формы глаголов и согласование) и немного разорванная структура. Объедините предложения логично, используйте правильные времена и формы причастий, добавьте связку, например "therefore" или "as a result", и конкретный пример достижения в соревнованиях.
Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child my parents enrolled me in swimming lessons, so I practiced swimming for about ten years. As a result, I joined a training team and competed in several local competitions.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: Ответ содержит хорошие личные детали, но есть многочисленные грамматические ошибки, повтор слов, неверная артикляция и местоимения ("her grudy" непонятно). Сделайте предложение короче и яснее, используйте простые времена (present perfect + present simple), исправьте названия и артикли, добавьте одно конкретное современное пример книги и причину, почему вам это нравится.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have enjoyed reading since childhood because it lets me escape into different worlds. For example, I used to read many novels like Robin Hood, and I still enjoy reading modern fiction and historical adventures today.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Puntuación: 78.0Sugerencia: Ответ естественный и связный, но можно добавить больше конкретики и связующих слов, чтобы ответ был чуть более развернутым (2–3 предложения). Уточните, как часто вы катались, и приведите пример последней совместной прогулки или преимуществ этого хобби.
Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child my father and I often cycled together in the park, usually at weekends. It was a great way to bond, and I remember one weekend ride when we explored a long trail and had a picnic afterwards.
Gramática
× I usually spend a hour each day practicing with apps and reading articles.
✓ I usually spend an hour each day practicing with apps and reading articles.
The indefinite article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. 'Hour' begins with a vowel sound /aʊər/, so use 'an' to make pronunciation smoother.
× Swimming became one of my favorite hobbies and I practicing it for about ten years because I joined training and taking part in competitions.
✓ Swimming became one of my favorite hobbies and I practiced it for about ten years because I joined training and took part in competitions.
The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. After 'I' you need the past simple 'practiced' to match 'became' and 'for about ten years' (past duration). Use 'took part' not 'taking part' to keep consistent past tense.
× Yes, of course I I have had a hobby of reading since my childhood because it helped me escape into different worlds I used to read a lot of novels, for example, Robin Hood is one of the my favorite and I still will enjoy reading her grudy nowadays.
✓ Yes, of course I have had a hobby of reading since my childhood because it helped me escape into different worlds. I used to read a lot of novels; for example, Robin Hood is one of my favorites, and I still enjoy reading it nowadays.
Multiple problems: double 'I I' is a typo; 'have had' with 'since my childhood' is acceptable but maintain continuity by splitting into sentences. 'the my favorite' incorrect article usage and 'favorites' needs plural. 'still will enjoy' is wrong future marker—use 'still enjoy' for present. 'her grudy' seems nonsensical and pronoun 'it' refers to a book. Corrections simplify tense and pronouns.
× for example, Robin Hood is one of the my favorite and I still will enjoy reading her grudy nowadays.
✓ For example, Robin Hood is one of my favorites, and I still enjoy reading it nowadays.
Use 'one of my favorites' (no 'the'). 'Her' is incorrect gender reference for a book; use 'it'. 'Will' is unnecessary—use present 'enjoy' to indicate ongoing habit.
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