Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar, and give clearer details. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and a short supporting detail using a linking word. For example, say what the hobby is (reading), how often you do it, and why you enjoy it.

Ejemplo: Yes. I enjoy reading every evening. For example, I read a chapter of a novel before bed because it helps me relax and sleep better.

Sugerencia: Give a clear past-tense statement and organise details with linking words. Use simple past for childhood activities, avoid fillers, and mention frequency and participants clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I used to play football every Sunday with my friends in the park because we enjoyed being active and social.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use correct tense: state the hobby and how long you've done it. Add a brief reason or example to support your answer, using linking words like 'since' or 'for'.

Ejemplo: Yes. I have loved reading since I was a child, and I have read books regularly for over ten years because my parents encouraged me to read.

Sugerencia: Clarify comparisons and use plural/singular correctly. Start with a clear topic sentence (No, we do not share the same hobbies), then give specific examples about family members using linking words like 'for example' and correct nouns/verbs.

Ejemplo: No, we do not share the same hobbies. For example, I enjoy reading books, my sister prefers watching TV, and my parents like gardening.

× Yes, I do have hobby that I have hobby every day.

✓ Yes, I do have a hobby that I do every day.

Original sentence omits the article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'hobby'. Use 'a hobby' for one hobby. Also replace the redundant second 'have hobby' with 'do' to describe performing the hobby. Suggestion: use 'a' with singular countable nouns and avoid repeating verbs unnecessarily.

× I have to list the book every evening before I go to bed.

✓ I read a book every evening before I go to bed.

The verb 'list' is incorrect here; likely intended verb is 'read'. Also 'the book' suggests a specific book; use 'a book' to indicate any book unless a specific book is meant. 'I read a book every evening' fits the habitual present tense. Suggestion: use 'read' for this activity and 'a' for non-specific singular nouns.

× Yes, when I watch a show, I have hobby umm, every Sunday because I can go out with my friend, I can go to park to play the football.

✓ Yes, when I watch a show, I do this hobby every Sunday because I can go out with my friend and go to the park to play football.

Multiple issues: use 'do this hobby' or 'practice this hobby' instead of 'have hobby'. Use 'friend' -> 'friends' if plural; here 'my friend' is OK singular but repetition of 'I can' is unnecessary; combine clauses with 'and'. Use 'the park' (specific known park) and omit 'the' before 'football' in general contexts or say 'play football' without 'the'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for hobbies, combine clauses to avoid repetition, and use articles correctly with common nouns.

× Yes, I have a hobby that I had since the childhood.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby that I have had since childhood.

This sentence mixes present perfect ('have') with simple past ('had') incorrectly. Use present perfect 'have had' to describe an action continuing from the past to the present. Also 'since childhood' does not need 'the'. Suggestion: use 'have had since' for things started in childhood and continuing now.

× No the family member not the same every hobby.

✓ No, my family members do not have the same hobbies.

Original sentence lacks subject-verb structure and misuses 'family member' and word order. Use plural 'family members' and correct negative form 'do not have' for present simple. Suggestion: form a proper subject + verb + object sentence and use plural for multiple people.

× For example for me I have hobby with the listing book and for my city she have hobby like they're watching the TV and for my parent they have a list.

✓ For example, I have a hobby of reading books, my sister (or 'someone in my city') likes watching TV, and my parents have a list of hobbies.

This sentence has many pronoun and word choice errors. 'I have hobby with the listing book' should be 'I have a hobby of reading books' or 'I like reading books'. 'For my city she have hobby' is unclear: replace with a specific person (sister, neighbor) and use correct verb 'has'. 'They're watching the TV' incorrectly uses 'they're'; use 'they' or 'she' with correct verb. 'My parent' should be 'my parents' and 'they have a list' is vague; possibly 'they have various hobbies' or 'a list of hobbies'. Suggestion: clarify who you mean, use correct pronouns, plural forms, and appropriate verbs ('has'/'have').