Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler sounds. Also correct grammar: use simple present for regular habits and clearer phrasing for future intent.

Ejemplo: Yes. I enjoy playing the guitar in my free time. For example, I practice for about 30 minutes every evening to learn new songs, which helps me relax and improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use past tense for childhood, and give one clear specific reason or memory. Reduce hesitations and correct sentence structure. Use a linking word when giving reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to dance when I was a child. For instance, I took ballet classes twice a week, which kept me fit and helped me feel relaxed after school.

Sugerencia: Be direct and avoid repeating. Use clear past and present contrast with linking words (e.g., 'however' or 'but'). Keep response to two or three sentences and fix tense consistency.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have the same hobby. As a child I enjoyed dancing, but now I prefer playing the guitar, so my interests have changed over time.

Sugerencia: Answer succinctly and give a brief specific comparison or example to support your point. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid fillers.

Ejemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, I play guitar while my sister prefers painting, so we spend free time on different activities.

× Yes, I do have my hobbies whenever I get a free time or whenever I'm free.

✓ Yes, I have hobbies whenever I get free time or whenever I'm free.

Use simple present 'I have' rather than 'I do have' for a habitual statement; 'free time' is uncountable so drop the article 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'I have hobbies' or 'I enjoy hobbies' for habits.

× Uh, I really love to practice my guitar and learn something new.

✓ I really love practicing my guitar and learning something new.

After 'love' for general likes, the gerund (-ing) is preferred in English for activities. Use 'practicing' and 'learning'. Suggestion: Use 'I love practicing...' for habitual activities.

× Guard song that uh, keeps my mind busy and I wouldn't practice more in the future.

✓ I play songs that keep my mind busy, and I will continue practicing in the future.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Guard' seems incorrect; likely 'play' or 'guitar' was intended. Use parallel structure and correct future expression: 'will continue' for intended future action. Avoid 'wouldn't' which implies conditional or negative meaning. Suggestion: Clarify the verb and use 'will' for future plans.

× Yes, I do have my child hobby that was dancing.

✓ Yes, I had a childhood hobby: dancing.

When referring to a past state, use past tense 'had' not 'do have'. 'Child hobby' is not idiomatic; use 'childhood hobby'. Use a colon or rephrase for clarity. Suggestion: Say 'My childhood hobby was dancing.'

× Uh, I feel like dancing makes our body, umm, healthy.

✓ I feel like dancing makes the body healthy.

Using 'our' is vague when referring to a general effect; 'the body' or 'one's body' is more natural. Also keep subject consistent: speaker should use 'I' or general statements with 'the' or 'one's'. Suggestion: Use 'dancing keeps the body healthy' or 'dancing keeps you healthy.'

× Uh, when our child, I used to think in this way and uh, make our mind busy and you know, umm, feel relaxed, no tension.

✓ When I was a child, I used to think this way: dancing keeps the mind busy and helps me feel relaxed, without tension.

'When our child' is incorrect; use 'When I was a child'. 'Make our mind busy' should be 'keeps the mind busy' and align pronouns. Use clearer clauses and punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'When I was a child, I believed dancing kept my mind busy and helped me relax.'

× No, I don't think I have same hobby uh, since I was a child uh, I, I, I had already said that I really love to play guitar whenever I have my free time, but when I was a child, I really love to dance as I told you before, So I think my hobby had changed.

✓ No, I don't think I have the same hobby since I was a child. I already said that I really love to play the guitar whenever I have free time, but when I was a child I loved to dance. So I think my hobby has changed.

Use present tense 'don't think I have' for current state and 'have the same hobby' with the definite article. For past habit, use past tense 'loved'. For change continuing to present, use present perfect 'has changed'. Remove repetitions and filler words. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent: past for childhood, present for now, present perfect for changes affecting present.

× My hobby had changed. So yes.

✓ My hobby has changed, so yes.

'Had changed' (past perfect) is unnecessary; use present perfect 'has changed' to show change up to now. Combine into one sentence for fluency. Suggestion: Use 'My hobby has changed.'

× No, I don't think I have same hobbies as my family members have uh, different people have different hobbies and different perspective, uh, to see the things.

✓ No, I don't think I have the same hobbies as my family members. Different people have different hobbies and different perspectives on things.

Add definite article 'the' before 'same hobbies'. Avoid repeating 'have' at the end. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' and phrase 'to see the things' is unnatural; use 'on things.' Suggestion: Say 'I don't have the same hobbies as my family. People have different hobbies and perspectives.'

× So I don't think I do have same hobbies. OK.

✓ So I don't think I have the same hobbies.

Remove unnecessary 'do' in affirmative structure after 'don't think'. Add 'the' before 'same hobbies'. Suggestion: Keep it concise: 'I don't think I have the same hobbies.'