Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak clearly and directly. Begin with a simple topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unrelated words. Use correct grammar (e.g., "My hobbies are playing cricket and listening to English movie songs").

Ejemplo: My hobbies are playing cricket and listening to songs from English movies. I play cricket twice a week with friends, which keeps me fit, and I listen to English movie songs to improve my language and relax.

Sugerencia: Answer with a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, then add specific details and a reason. Use correct tense and avoid fillers like "uh." Be concise and coherent with linking words (e.g., "because, so, and").

Ejemplo: Yes. As a child, my main hobby was playing cricket because I wanted to become a professional player. I practiced every day with neighborhood friends and watched matches on TV to learn techniques.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, relevant answer. If you have a lifelong hobby, say it clearly and describe how it continued. Avoid confusing unrelated ideas (studying abroad is not a hobby). Keep to one topic and use linking words to explain continuity (e.g., "since, for, always").

Ejemplo: Yes. I have loved learning English since childhood and have continued studying it by watching films and reading books. Because of this interest, I later chose to study abroad in the UK to improve my language skills further.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly about shared hobbies. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clear vocabulary ("my brother has the same hobby"). Explain similarities briefly with a specific example and linking words (e.g., "for example, we both enjoy..."). Avoid unrelated details about work or travel unless they relate to hobbies.

Ejemplo: Yes. My brother and I both enjoy playing cricket on weekends. For example, we often practice together and sometimes join the same local team, which helps us improve and spend time together.

× That's my My hobbies are playing cricket and listening in the English movie song Extra are my.

✓ My hobbies are playing cricket and listening to English movie songs.

The original sentence has redundant and jumbled fragments ('That's my My' and 'Extra are my') and incorrect preposition 'in'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and also preposition use (ID 11). To improve, remove duplication, use correct word order 'My hobbies are ...', and use the preposition 'to' with 'listening' and plural 'songs' to match 'movie songs'.

× Yes, when I was child there is my hobby.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, it was my hobby.

The sentence misuses 'there is' in a past context and omits the article 'a' before 'child'. This is a 'There be' problem (ID 3) and article/structure issue. Use past tense 'was' and a clear pronoun 'it' to refer to the hobby: 'it was my hobby.'

× To become a uh, beer army or playing cricket or to be a cricketer in our own country and make my family, our country proud is my childhood hobby.

✓ My childhood hobby was to play cricket and become a cricketer in my country to make my family and my country proud.

The original mixes infinitives and -ing forms ('To become', 'playing cricket') awkwardly and has unclear words ('beer army'). This fits 'Verb + -ing form' problem (ID 8) and sentence structure (ID 26). Use parallel infinitives or base forms consistently: 'to play' and 'to become' or 'was playing'. Also remove unclear terms and arrange ideas in a clear order.

× Yes, yes, my hobby since I wrote to uh be going abroad for studies is my childhood since always I studied in another university in foreign country like United Kingdom, UK. It's my hobby.

✓ Yes. Since childhood, my hobby has been to study abroad; I studied at a university in the United Kingdom.

The original uses incorrect tense and word order ('since I wrote to uh be going abroad') and repeats 'since'. This is a present tense and tense-consistency issue (ID 6). Use present perfect 'has been' to describe a hobby that started in the past and continues, and simple past 'studied' for the completed action of studying at a university. Also improve word order and remove fillers.

× Yes, my brother have the same service, they also going to Surrey abroad and they are work industrial abroad.

✓ Yes, my brother has the same job; they also went abroad to Surrey and they work in industry there.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('brother have' should be 'brother has') and incorrect verb forms ('they also going', 'they are work'). This is subject-verb agreement (ID 27) and tense/form errors. Ensure singular subjects take singular verbs, use correct past or present forms ('went' for past movement, 'work' for present occupation), and correct preposition 'in industry' or 'in the industrial sector'.