Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and concise sentences (max 5). Organize supporting details with linking words and specific information (what games, how often, who you play with, when). Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy playing video games with my friends. I usually play multiplayer games like FIFA or Call of Duty online on weekends because I am busy with work during the week. Playing together helps me relax and stay in touch with friends, and we typically play for two to three hours each session.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence and give specific details (what the hobby was, why you liked it, how often you did it, any memorable events). Use correct tense and avoid vague or confusing words. Keep it within five sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child, but my favourite was riding a sports bike. I liked it because it felt exciting and made me feel independent. I used to ride in the park near my house every weekend with my friends, and once we entered a small local race which was a memorable experience for me.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence stating the hobby and use past-to-present structure (I started..., and I still...). Provide specific details about how it has continued, how often you paint, what you paint, and why it matters. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and correct grammar to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have been painting since childhood and I still enjoy it. I started with simple watercolours when I was about eight, and now I mostly paint landscapes and portraits. Although I have less time because I work in a store, I usually paint for a couple of hours on Sundays to relax and improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (No, I don't) then explain with specific comparisons and linking words. Mention one or two family members and their hobbies, contrast them with yours, and give reasons or examples. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. For example, my father likes collecting luxury cars and spends time researching models, whereas I enjoy cycling for exercise and leisure. We respect each other's interests and sometimes go on family bike rides together.

× You do I have a hobby to play games with my friends only as busy when this I don't get any time to get with links to my friend because as I'm working so I really like so I really like it very game in my weekend.

✓ I have a hobby of playing games with my friends, but I only have time to do this on weekends because I am busy with work during the week.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word order, repetition, and unclear connectors. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). The corrected sentence reorders elements into a clear subject-verb-object structure, uses the gerund 'playing' after 'hobby of', links clauses with 'but' and 'because', and clarifies time expression 'on weekends'. Suggestion: break long ideas into shorter clauses, use 'hobby of + -ing' and place time expressions at the end or after the verb phrase for clarity.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child? Student: Yes, I do have a lot of kind of hobbies, but one of my favorite hobbies was related to a sports bike.

✓ Yes, I had many hobbies, but one of my favorite hobbies was riding a sports bike.

The student mixes present and past tenses: 'I do have' is present while the question asks about childhood (past). This matches 'Past tense issue' (ID 5). Use 'had' for past possession and 'riding' (gerund) after 'hobby was' to describe the activity. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently when talking about childhood and use 'many' instead of 'a lot of kind of'.

× Obviously you need to ride a sports bike because it was very prominent and nice looting and from my perspective I haven't ate that hobby but I will assume you actually bring.

✓ I enjoyed riding a sports bike because it looked attractive and exciting, but I did not continue that hobby.

The original contains incorrect adjective use ('prominent' and 'nice looting' are inappropriate) and wrong verbs ('haven't ate' is incorrect). This matches 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13) and also past tense errors. The correction uses appropriate adjectives 'attractive' and 'exciting', and correct past tense 'did not continue'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that describe appearance or feeling and use correct verb forms ('eat' is not used for continuing a hobby). Keep tense consistent.

× I will assume you actually bring.

✓ (Omit sentence)

This fragment is incomplete and unclear, lacking context and proper verb structure, which is a 'Sentence structure error' (ID 26). It should be removed or rewritten with a clear subject and verb. Suggestion: replace with a complete thought if needed, for example 'I will assume you meant that.' or remove it if irrelevant.

× Yeah, I do have a hobby there seems to worry with time and what really need to do a painting and from that time till now I'm still doing painting.

✓ Yes, I have had a hobby in painting since childhood, and I have continued to paint until now.

The original sentence has unclear phrasing and mixed tenses ('seems to worry with time', 'what really need to do'). This is 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). The correction uses present perfect 'have had' to show a hobby that started in the past and continues, and 'continued to paint' for ongoing action. Suggestion: use 'have/has + past participle' for activities that started in the past and continue to present, and use clear verbs like 'paint' or 'painting'.

× But these days I don't really get a plan in painting as I'm working department of the store.

✓ These days I don't have much time for painting because I work in a department store.

The student uses incorrect verbs 'get a plan' and awkward noun phrase 'working department of the store'. This fits 'Present tense issue' (ID 6) and 'Incorrect use of prepositions' (ID 11). The correction uses present simple 'don't have' for current routine and correct preposition 'in a department store'. Suggestion: use 'have time for' to express availability and the correct noun phrase for workplaces.

× But I love painting what I drink for free time and weekends or.

✓ But I love painting in my free time and on weekends.

The sentence uses incorrect words 'what I drink' and wrong prepositions. This is an 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (ID 12) combined with preposition errors. The correction uses the correct prepositional phrases 'in my free time' and 'on weekends'. Suggestion: learn common time expressions: 'in my free time', 'on weekends'.

× No, I'm not, but to be honest my family has different kind of hobbies and from me also I have different kind of hobbies compared with them.

✓ No, they do not. To be honest, my family has different hobbies from mine.

The student uses 'No, I'm not' and awkward comparative phrasing. This is 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (ID 12) and sentence structure issue. 'No, I'm not' is wrong response to 'Do you have the same hobbies?' Use 'No, they do not' or 'No, I don't'. The correction clarifies possession with 'hobbies from mine'. Suggestion: answer yes/no questions with matching subjects and use 'different from' to compare.

× For example, my father has a hobby to buy a luxurious car, but for me the hobby is to ride a bicycle.

✓ For example, my father likes buying luxury cars, but I prefer riding a bicycle.

The phrase 'hobby to buy a luxurious car' is awkward; 'luxurious' used incorrectly. This matches 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' (ID 13). The correction uses natural collocations: 'likes buying luxury cars' and 'prefer riding a bicycle'. Suggestion: use 'luxury car' as the noun phrase and 'like/ prefer + -ing' for hobbies.