Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Hạn chế lặp từ và dùng liên từ hợp lý để làm rõ lý do. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề đơn giản: nêu rõ sở thích chính. (2) Nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và mạch lạc, mỗi lý do một cụm, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để nối. (3) Tránh các lỗi như “hear let my hair down” — dùng thành ngữ đúng: “let my hair down” và động từ phù hợp.

Ejemplo: I enjoy several hobbies, but my favorite is watching films. I find films relaxing because they help me forget work stress, and I can truly let my hair down while watching them.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng đúng thì (quá khứ) và động từ phù hợp, sắp xếp câu mạch lạc hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ở quá khứ, rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại chương trình) và một lý do ngắn. Tránh các mệnh đề lộn xộn như “parents live left me with the TV” — thay bằng cách diễn đạt rõ ràng. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I loved watching TV. My parents often let me watch it after school, so I could watch for hours. I especially enjoyed cartoons and talent shows, which made me laugh and dream.

Sugerencia: Dùng thì chính xác (present perfect for continuing actions) và diễn đạt tự nhiên, tránh lặp từ. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề: xác nhận sở thích kéo dài từ nhỏ đến nay. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ thể loại truyện, lý do thích) và dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để liên kết ý. Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: Yes, I've enjoyed reading comics since childhood. They relax me and make me curious about what happens next, so I always look forward to the next issue.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp; cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh cụm từ không chính xác như “go joking” — có thể là “jogging”. Dùng liên từ để giải thích khác biệt (e.g., “because”), và nêu làm gì khác nhau cụ thể. Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: No, my family and I have different hobbies. They prefer healthier activities like jogging or running, while I usually stay up late watching films.

× I do have many hobbies but the most I like is watching film.

✓ I do have many hobbies, but the one I like the most is watching films.

The phrase 'the most I like' is incorrect word order and 'film' should be plural when speaking generally. Use 'the one I like the most' to correctly identify the favorite hobby and 'films' to indicate general activity. Suggestion: Reorder to 'the one I like the most' and use the plural 'films' when talking about watching movies in general.

× I find watching film really like relax, act to work and I can hear let my hair down.

✓ I find watching films really relaxing after work and it helps me let my hair down.

'Like relax' is incorrect; use the adjective form 'relaxing' after 'find'. 'Act to work' is unclear; 'after work' fits the context. 'I can hear let my hair down' is wrong word choice and word order; use 'it helps me let my hair down.' Also use plural 'films' for general activity. Suggestion: Use 'find + object + adjective(-ing)' structure (find watching films relaxing) and 'help(s) someone + infinitive' (helps me let my hair down).

× When I was a child, I still love watching TV too.

✓ When I was a child, I loved watching TV too.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'loved', not present 'love'. Suggestion: Match tense to time expressions; use past tense for past time frames.

× My parents live left me with the TV.

✓ My parents left me with the TV.

'live left' is ungrammatical; probably an extra word 'live' was inserted mistakenly. The correct structure is 'My parents left me with the TV.' Suggestion: Remove unintended words and use past tense 'left' to describe an action in the past.

× I could watch it all day.

✓ I could watch it all day.

This sentence is acceptable; 'it' correctly refers to television. No change needed. Suggestion: No correction required.

× I watched the TV show, the cartoon or the singing program.

✓ I watched TV shows, cartoons, or singing programs.

When listing types of programs in general, use plurals ('TV shows, cartoons, singing programs') and omit the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general categories and remove unnecessary articles.

× I have like reading comics since the childhood.

✓ I have liked reading comics since childhood.

After 'have' for present perfect, use past participle 'liked' (have liked). Also 'since childhood' does not need 'the'. Remove 'like' as present filler; 'have liked' expresses duration from past to present. Suggestion: Use present perfect 'have + past participle' for actions that started in the past and continue now, and omit 'the' before 'childhood'.

× I feel so relaxed and curious about the next content of the chapter, the next chapter you know and I like so look forward for the next chapter on the next.

✓ I feel relaxed and curious about the next chapter, and I really look forward to reading it.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and unnecessary repetition. Use 'curious about the next chapter' and the phrase 'look forward to' followed by a gerund or noun ('reading it'). 'Look forward for' is incorrect preposition use; correct is 'look forward to'. Suggestion: Use concise phrasing, avoid repetition, and remember 'look forward to + noun/verb-ing'.

× No, we. Have different hobby like they prefer more healthy topics and hobbies like go joking or something like running but you know I watching too late.

✓ No, we have different hobbies. They prefer healthier activities like jogging or running, but I stay up watching TV too late.

Multiple issues: sentence split needed, plural 'hobbies' required, 'more healthy' should be 'healthier', 'go joking' is likely 'jogging', and 'I watching too late' needs verb form 'I stay up watching TV too late.' The corrected version clarifies meaning and fixes grammar. Suggestion: Use correct comparative 'healthier', correct noun forms ('hobbies'), correct verb forms ('stay up watching'), and check spelling ('jogging').