Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сократите и упростите ответ, чтобы он был грамматически правильным и естественным. Начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте краткую деталь (сколько лет и какой стиль). Избегайте неправильных форм («is set and dance is») и лишних слов.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I have been dancing for about ten years, mostly contemporary and jazz, which I practice three times a week.

Sugerencia: Исправьте грамматику и сделайте ответ более конкретным: назовите конкретный вид танца или опишите, когда и как вы начали. Используйте связующее слово, если добавляете деталь.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I started learning ballet when I was six, and I continued taking weekly classes throughout my childhood.

Sugerencia: Избегайте повторов и используйте правильные времена. Начните с прямого ответа, затем уточните длительность или развитие хобби с помощью связочного слова.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I have been dancing since I was a child, and over the years I moved from recreational classes to more formal training.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте предложение грамматически корректно и избегайте неуместных слов (например, «hardworking» не является хобби). Скажите прямо, кто разделяет хобби и приведите конкретный пример совместной деятельности.

Ejemplo: Yes, my father and I both enjoy dancing. We used to attend dance classes together when I was young, and we still practise dance routines at family events.

× My hobby is set and dance is.

✓ My hobby is dancing.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. Use the gerund 'dancing' as a noun to state a hobby. Also remove the extraneous words 'set and' which make the sentence ungrammatical. Suggestion: say 'My hobby is dancing.' or 'I enjoy dancing.'.

× I have been dancing about 10 years.

✓ I have been dancing for about 10 years.

When indicating duration with 'have been ...', use 'for' before a period of time. The original misses the preposition 'for'. Use 'for about 10 years' to show duration. Alternative: 'I have danced for about 10 years.'.

× Definitely yes, a certain dances has been my hobby since my childhood.

✓ Definitely yes, certain dances have been my hobby since my childhood.

'Dances' is plural, so the verb must be 'have' not 'has'. Also the article 'a' is incorrect before plural 'dances'. Use 'certain dances have been' or 'a particular dance has been' for singular. Suggestion: 'Certain dances have been my hobby since childhood.'.

× As I said before, my hobby is dancing since my childhood.

✓ As I said before, I have been dancing since my childhood.

When expressing an action that started in the past and continues now, use present perfect (have been dancing), not 'is dancing since'. 'My hobby is dancing since' is incorrect structure. Use 'I have been dancing since my childhood' or 'dancing has been my hobby since childhood.'.

× For example, my father and I share some hobbies. Uh we both hardworking and dedicated and has been dancing since our childhood.

✓ For example, my father and I share some hobbies. We are both hardworking and dedicated and have been dancing since our childhood.

The clause 'we both hardworking and dedicated' lacks the verb 'are'. Also 'has been' is incorrect for plural subject 'we'; use 'have been'. Combine properly: 'We are both hardworking and dedicated and have been dancing since our childhood.'.