Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (study → studying; a extremely → extremely; have a extremely knowledge → gain a lot of knowledge), tránh lặp từ và đưa thêm một cụ thể ngắn gọn làm ví dụ hoặc kết quả. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ejemplo: My main hobby is studying because I enjoy learning new things. For example, I often read books about personal development, which has helped me improve my time-management skills.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp và cấu trúc rõ ràng (is → was; eating sweet food → eating sweets). Tránh lặp từ và nêu lý do cụ thể hơn. Có thể thêm một ví dụ ngắn về tần suất hoặc một kỷ niệm để câu tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I loved eating sweets, especially chocolate. I used to have a small piece after school almost every day because it made me feel relaxed and happy.

Sugerencia: Câu rất lộn xộn về ngữ pháp và trật tự ý. Cần dùng thì phù hợp (has changed → has changed as I grew up), loại bỏ từ thừa, và hoàn thành ý: nêu rõ hobby cũ và hiện tại, cùng với lý do chuyển đổi. Giữ 2–3 câu, liên kết bằng từ nối phù hợp.

Ejemplo: My hobbies have changed as I grew up. For example, I used to enjoy eating candy a lot, but now I prefer cooking healthy meals because I want to stay fit.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt (I am mother → My mother and I; it's improve my family → it helps my family). Trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp, nêu rõ hobby chung và lý do. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động chung để câu thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother and I share a hobby: cooking. We often prepare dinner together on weekends, which helps us bond and ensures we eat healthier meals.

× Yes, my hobby is study because when I study I can have a extremely knowledge so it can improve my life.

✓ Yes, my hobby is studying because when I study I can gain a lot of knowledge, so it can improve my life.

Use the gerund 'studying' after 'hobby is' not the base verb 'study'. Replace 'have a extremely knowledge' with 'gain a lot of knowledge' for correct collocation and article/quantifier use. Use a comma before 'so' to join clauses properly.

× As a child, my hobby is eating sweet food. For example, I like eating chocolate or sweet because it can make me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ As a child, my hobby was eating sweet foods. For example, I liked eating chocolate or sweets because they made me feel relaxed and happy.

When referring to childhood use past tense 'was' and 'liked'. Use plural 'sweet foods' or 'sweets' and plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'chocolates/sweets'. Change 'make' to past 'made' to match past timeframe.

× My hobby has changed when I grow for example, otherwise I I like eating candies, but now I ate a healthy food and.

✓ My hobbies have changed as I grew up. For example, I used to like eating candies, but now I eat healthy food.

Use past reference 'have changed' with 'as I grew up' (or 'when I grew up'). Correct subject-verb agreement 'hobbies have'. 'Used to' indicates past habit. Use present 'eat' for current habit and remove extra words and repetition. Fix article: 'healthy food' without 'a'."

× My mother and I have the same hobbies, for example. I am mother and also like cooking dinner for my family because it's, uh, improve my family.

✓ My mother and I share the same hobbies. For example, my mother and I both like cooking dinner for the family because it brings our family closer and improves our family life.

Replace awkward 'I am mother' with 'my mother and I'. Use 'share the same hobbies' or 'have the same hobbies'. 'Because it's, uh, improve my family' is ungrammatical; express purpose/result with 'because it brings our family closer' or 'improves our family life'. Use 'both' to show shared action.