Hobby— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep answers clear and directly relevant. Use a simple topic sentence naming your main hobbies, avoid uncommon or incorrect words (e.g., 'plethora' is fine but follow with clear nouns), and list hobbies in a natural order. Limit to 2–3 short sentences and use linking words if you add details. Be specific (e.g., what kind of books, what you do in cooking).

Ejemplo: I enjoy several hobbies, especially cooking and reading. For example, I like cooking Italian dishes and reading contemporary novels, which help me relax and learn new ideas.

Sugerencia: Answer simply and accurately. Start with a clear topic sentence about childhood hobbies, then give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect phrases and repetition. Keep sentences short and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I enjoyed drawing and rock climbing because drawing let me be creative and climbing kept me active and confident.

Sugerencia: Be direct: name the long-term hobby, explain how you have kept it, and give one specific supporting detail. Use correct expressions (“I have had since childhood”) and avoid vague words like 'foggy' or 'spirit of the ambition.' Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have loved cooking since I was a child. I learned many recipes from my mother and her friends, and I still practice them on weekends to try new variants.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) and then briefly explain similarities or differences with one example. Use simple, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'same hobbies' not 'sensors') and avoid unnecessary qualifiers like 'to be brutally honest.'

Ejemplo: No, most of my family do not share my hobbies. For instance, I enjoy cooking and reading, while my uncle prefers gardening and my sister is into sports.

× Yes, I have a plethora of hobbies which makes me more capitating to do exciting things such as cooking, wedding, books and good artists based type of I have.

✓ Yes, I have a plethora of hobbies, which make me more capable of doing exciting things such as cooking, reading books, and appreciating good art.

Subject-verb agreement and adjective choice: 'a plethora of hobbies' is plural, so use 'make' not 'makes' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 1). 'Capitating' is incorrect; use 'capable' or 'excited' to convey ability or interest. 'Wedding, books and good artists based type of I have' is unclear and ungrammatical; I changed it to 'reading books, and appreciating good art' to match common hobby descriptions. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number agree and choose correct adjectives/phrases for clarity.

× Of course, then I wore the cake I had pulsara of happy bikinis and some energetic hobbies which makes me more fascinating and fascinating as compared to the other trials such as rock climbing and drawing. So.

✓ Of course. Back then I enjoyed activities like cake decorating, swimming in the sea, and other energetic hobbies such as rock climbing and drawing.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb 'wore the cake' and nonstandard words like 'pulsara' and 'bikinis' used oddly. I replaced with clear past tense verbs 'enjoyed' and specific activities. Also corrected plural and agreement by avoiding 'which makes me' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 and 27). Suggestion: use simple clear past tense verbs for childhood activities and avoid invented words.

× Yes, I already mentioned I have several type of foggy and now I am engaging with same energy and leaving spirit of the ambition. It's about a cooking which I learned various recipes from my mother and friends mother as well.

✓ Yes, I already mentioned I have several types of hobbies, and now I am engaging with the same energy and persistent ambition. It's about cooking; I learned various recipes from my mother and my friends' mothers as well.

Noun number and gerund use: 'several type' should be 'several types' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'A cooking' is incorrect; 'cooking' as a hobby is uncountable (Grammar Problem Type ID 22/13). 'Friends mother' requires possessive 'friends' mothers'. Also clarified 'engaging with same energy and leaving spirit' to 'engaging with the same energy and persistent ambition' for idiomatic clarity. Suggestion: check countability of nouns and use possessive correctly.

× To be brutally honest, in my family member there are no one have the same sensors as well as me. Apart from that, only my uncles have a united and bizarre hobbies As for me.

✓ To be honest, there is no one in my family who has the same interests as I do. Apart from that, only my uncles have a few unusual hobbies compared with mine.

Pronoun and agreement errors: 'in my family member there are no one' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'there is no one in my family who has...' (Grammar Problem Type ID 3 and 12). 'Sensors' is wrong word choice; 'interests' fits. 'Have the same... as well as me' should be 'the same interests as I do.' 'Uncles have a united and bizarre hobbies' corrected to 'a few unusual hobbies' for number agreement (Grammar Problem Type ID 1) and natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct relative clause 'who has' and match singular/plural and pronoun forms.