Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "play with our phone adolescent". To improve, use clear and correct expressions, and organise your answer with a topic sentence followed by specific examples. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must submit their homework on time every day, and using mobile phones during lessons is not allowed to help us concentrate on our studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your opinion but has grammatical mistakes and some repetition. To improve, express your ideas clearly with correct grammar, use linking words to connect ideas, and avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily.

Ejemplo: I don't believe that having more rules would benefit students. In fact, too many rules might cause stress, which can make it harder for students to concentrate and develop problem-solving skills independently.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains pronoun confusion and grammatical errors. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct pronouns, and organise your answer with clear linking words to make it coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She always cares about her students and identifies the difficulties they face. Then, she teaches them how to solve problems and develop problem-solving skills effectively.

× There are quite many rules at my school such as we should hand in the homework on time every day and we cannot play with our phone adolescent and to keep us to focus on our study.

✓ There are quite many rules at my school such as we should hand in the homework on time every day and we cannot play with our phones during adolescence to help us focus on our studies.

The word 'phone' should be plural 'phones' because it refers to multiple devices students might have. 'Adolescent' is incorrectly used; the correct phrase is 'during adolescence' or 'as adolescents'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic subjects in general.

× There are quite many rules at my school such as we should hand in the homework on time every day and we cannot play with our phone adolescent and to keep us to focus on our study.

✓ There are quite many rules at my school such as we should hand in the homework on time every day and we cannot play with our phones during adolescence to help us focus on our studies.

The phrase 'and to keep us to focus on our study' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to help us focus on our studies'. Also, 'during adolescence' is the correct prepositional phrase instead of 'adolescent'.

× I don't think students will benefit more for more words because more rules will make the student feel stressed.

✓ I don't think students will benefit more from more rules because more rules will make the students feel stressed.

The phrase 'benefit more for more words' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'benefit more from more rules'. Also, 'words' should be 'rules' as per context. Additionally, 'the student' should be plural 'the students' to match the plural subject.

× I don't think students will benefit more for more words because more rules will make the student feel stressed.

✓ I don't think students will benefit more from more rules because more rules will make the students feel stressed.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject 'students' earlier in the sentence.

× When the student feels stressed, then they can they cannot focus on their study and they cannot learn how to solve the problems by themselves.

✓ When students feel stressed, they cannot focus on their studies and cannot learn how to solve problems by themselves.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect pronoun agreement. 'They can they cannot' is contradictory and incorrect. Also, 'the student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'they'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies'.

× Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. He always takes care of her students and she will find out what difficulties does the students have and then teach them to solve the problem.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She always takes care of her students and finds out what difficulties the students have and then teaches them to solve the problems.

The pronouns are inconsistent: 'He' should be 'She' to match 'her job'. Also, 'does the students have' is incorrect word order; it should be 'the students have'. Verbs should agree with singular subject 'she'.

× And she always teach her students those problem solving skills so they can learn.

✓ And she always teaches her students those problem-solving skills so they can learn.

The verb 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving' when used as an adjective.