Rules— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Yeah, there are so many rules. Our school has so many limited for us. For example, we don't allow to use electricity after 10:00 PM and we are not allowed to use high-powered electrical devices. These rules are in place to ensure safety.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
I think there are two sides of it. I don't thinks all the students have self-control and I believe it would benefit. The students have high quality of control themselves. They will make their life better without those rules but not for the others.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
I think all of my teacher does their job very well, they're all really pleasant people and they will come to our apartment to make sure our safe when we have something need to tell them. They always respect us a lot.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“so many limited”应为“many limitations”或“many rules”，以及“we don't allow to use electricity”应为“we are not allowed to use electricity”。建议注意语法结构，使用正确的被动语态，并避免重复表达。
Ejemplo: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we are not allowed to use electricity after 10:00 PM, and high-powered electrical devices are prohibited. These rules are implemented to ensure everyone's safety.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“don't thinks”应为“don't think”，句子结构不够清晰，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使观点更连贯，并明确表达两方面的观点。
Ejemplo: I think there are two sides to this issue. On one hand, some students lack self-control and would benefit from more rules. On the other hand, students who are responsible can manage well without extra rules.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误，如“all of my teacher does”应为“all of my teachers do”，以及“make sure our safe”应为“make sure we are safe”。建议注意主谓一致和正确使用短语，同时使句子更简洁自然。
Ejemplo: I think all of my teachers do their jobs very well. They are pleasant and always check on us to ensure we are safe. They treat us with great respect.
Gramática
× Our school has so many limited for us.
✓ Our school has so many limits for us.
这里的'limited'是形容词，应该用名词'limits'表示'限制'，且是复数形式。
× we don't allow to use electricity after 10:00 PM
✓ we are not allowed to use electricity after 10:00 PM
动词'allow'后面接动词时需要用不定式，但这里主语是'we'，应使用被动语态表达'不被允许'，即'are not allowed to use'。
× I don't thinks all the students have self-control
✓ I don't think all the students have self-control
动词'think'在第一人称单数中不加's'，'thinks'是第三人称单数形式。
× I think all of my teacher does their job very well
✓ I think all of my teachers do their job very well
'teacher'应为复数'teachers'，动词与复数主语一致用'do'。
× they're all really pleasant people and they will come to our apartment to make sure our safe when we have something need to tell them
✓ they're all really pleasant people and they will come to our dormitory to make sure we are safe when we have something to tell them
'our safe'应为'we are safe'，'apartment'应改为'dormitory'更符合学校环境，'something need to tell them'应为'something to tell them'。
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