Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Actually there are lots of rules for students at my school. For example, be punctual. Students are required to be in class at on time so that they won't interrupt the lesson and also they need to hang their homework on time.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
More rules doesn't mean that it's good 'cause if there are too many rules for students they will help over restricted and also will lose their motivation and creative to do something. So we don't need so many rules at school.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
I consider my English teacher who does her job very well. She always prepare the class in advance. So her class was well prepared and very attractive for the student who will help us to.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“at on time”和“hang their homework on time”。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复和冗余,同时使用更自然的表达方式。
Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must be punctual to avoid disrupting lessons, and they are required to submit their homework on time.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法练习,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并且表达观点时更具体。
Ejemplo: I don't think having more rules is beneficial because too many rules can make students feel restricted, which may reduce their motivation and creativity. Therefore, a moderate number of rules is better.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,如“prepare”应为“prepares”,句子结尾不完整。建议注意主谓一致,句子完整,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ejemplo: I think my English teacher does her job very well because she always prepares the class in advance. As a result, her lessons are well organized and very engaging for students.
× For example, be punctual.
✓ For example, being punctual.
此处需要动名词形式作宾语,不能用动词原形。动词+ing形式在此处表示一般行为或习惯。
× Students are required to be in class at on time so that they won't interrupt the lesson and also they need to hang their homework on time.
✓ Students are required to be in class on time so that they won't interrupt the lesson and also they need to hand in their homework on time.
介词短语应为“on time”表示准时,不能用“at on time”。“hang their homework”用词错误,应为“hand in their homework”表示提交作业。
× More rules doesn't mean that it's good 'cause if there are too many rules for students they will help over restricted and also will lose their motivation and creative to do something.
✓ More rules don't mean that it's good because if there are too many rules for students they will feel over-restricted and also will lose their motivation and creativity to do something.
主语“More rules”为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“don't”。“help over restricted”表达错误,应为“feel over-restricted”。“creative”应为名词“creativity”。
× More rules doesn't mean that it's good 'cause if there are too many rules for students they will help over restricted and also will lose their motivation and creative to do something.
✓ More rules don't mean that it's good because if there are too many rules for students they will feel over-restricted and also will lose their motivation and creativity to do something.
此处“help over restricted”用词错误,应使用动词“feel”加形容词“over-restricted”表示感到过度限制。
× She always prepare the class in advance.
✓ She always prepares the class in advance.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,使用“prepares”。
× So her class was well prepared and very attractive for the student who will help us to.
✓ So her class is well prepared and very attractive for the students, which helps us a lot.
句子结构不完整,时态应与前文一致使用一般现在时,“student”应为复数“students”,并且“who will help us to”表达不完整,改为“which helps us a lot”更通顺。