Rules— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về các quy tắc học sinh phải tuân theo, tránh nói lan man về phòng ốc. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms from Monday to Friday. Also, we are expected to be punctual and respect our teachers.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời không đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy tập trung trả lời về việc có nên có thêm nhiều quy tắc hay không, sử dụng câu rõ ràng và chính xác. Đồng thời, tránh nhầm lẫn từ vựng như 'rooms' thay vì 'rules'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because they need freedom and independence to learn effectively.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau một cách mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is smart, talented, and friendly. Thanks to her guidance, many students have achieved success and personal development.

× Yes, my school have a many rooms for students and for teachers.

✓ Yes, my school has many rooms for students and teachers.

The subject 'school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'a many rooms' is incorrect; 'many rooms' is the correct plural quantifier without 'a'.

× For example for students they we we must wear uniform from Monday to Friday and teachers.

✓ For example, students must wear uniforms from Monday to Friday, and teachers must as well.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect pronouns 'they we we'. Also, 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to match the plural subject 'students'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Uh I don't think student would benefit more from more rooms because a student need a freedom and independent in school.

✓ Uh, I don't think students would benefit more from more rules because students need freedom and independence in school.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Need' should be 'need' for plural subject. 'A freedom' is incorrect; 'freedom' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article. 'Independent' should be 'independence' as a noun to fit the sentence.

× Her job is very well.

✓ She does her job very well.

'Her job is very well' is incorrect because 'well' is an adverb and cannot describe 'job' (a noun). The correct expression is 'She does her job very well.'

× She is a very smart, intelligent, talented and friendly and her careers in success and development.

✓ She is very smart, intelligent, talented, and friendly, and her career is successful and developing.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction usage and noun forms. 'Careers' should be singular 'career'. 'In success and development' is awkward; better to say 'her career is successful and developing'. Also, remove the extra 'and' before 'her careers'. The adjectives are correctly used but need proper conjunctions and sentence structure.