Part 1
Examinador
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Candidato
Actually this is kind of hard to say but I think there's many rules. A school for a student for example is maybe wear a uniform every day or they can dry their hair. They have to wear shoes.
Examinador
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Candidato
Yes, I do, uh, because when students follow their school rules, they can improve their discipline and they have to do. Right in school.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Candidato
Yes I do is my math teacher. She's wonderful teachers. I have admit when she taught me about new lesson. She's have a lot of practice, exercise and they take care.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh những câu không cần thiết và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về các quy định trong trường.
Ejemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day and always wear shoes. Additionally, there are rules about personal grooming, such as not drying hair in class. These rules help maintain discipline and a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác hoặc câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể tại sao nhiều quy tắc có thể có lợi cho học sinh.
Ejemplo: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because it helps them develop better discipline. For instance, strict rules can encourage students to be more responsible and focused on their studies, which improves their overall performance.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả của câu trả lời. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách giáo viên giúp bạn học tập.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have a math teacher who does her job very well. She explains new lessons clearly and provides many practice exercises. Moreover, she is very caring and always willing to help students who have difficulties.
× Actually this is kind of hard to say but I think there's many rules.
✓ Actually this is kind of hard to say but I think there are many rules.
The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular. Since 'rules' is plural, the correct form is 'there are'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× A school for a student for example is maybe wear a uniform every day or they can dry their hair.
✓ A school rule for a student, for example, is maybe to wear a uniform every day or they can dry their hair.
The original sentence lacks the preposition 'to' before the verb 'wear' which is necessary after 'is maybe'. Also, the phrase 'A school for a student' is unclear; adding 'rule' clarifies the meaning. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure issue.
× She's wonderful teachers.
✓ She's a wonderful teacher.
The subject 'She' is singular, so the noun should be singular 'teacher' and include the article 'a'. 'Teachers' is plural and does not agree with the singular subject. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I have admit when she taught me about new lesson.
✓ I have to admit when she taught me about a new lesson.
The phrase 'I have admit' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to admit' to express obligation. Also, 'new lesson' needs the article 'a' before it. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and articles.
× She's have a lot of practice, exercise and they take care.
✓ She has a lot of practice exercises and she takes care.
'She's have' is incorrect; it should be 'She has'. Also, 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match 'a lot of'. 'They take care' is unclear; it should be 'she takes care' to refer to the teacher. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and singular/plural agreement.