Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer both parts directly: say that you enjoy buying shoes and give a clear frequency. Avoid unnatural phrases such as “I like a shopping” and “trendy is so sensitive.” Use a linking word such as “because” to explain your interest, and finish your sentence instead of stopping abruptly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes, especially trainers. I usually buy a new pair every month because I like keeping up with fashion trends. I’m particularly interested in modern designs and limited-edition styles.

Sugerencia: Start with a complete direct answer, then explain what you bought and why. Use a specific noun, such as “a pair of Adidas trainers,” instead of the unclear phrase “a really cool boost.” Avoid repetition and complete the reason; for example, explain that many people recommended the shoes or that online shopping was convenient.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Recently, I bought a pair of Adidas trainers online because I liked their stylish design and many people recommended them. They were also cheaper online than in local shops.

Sugerencia: Give the amount confidently and explain your spending habits with clear grammar. Avoid repetition such as “probably Probably” and “quality good quality.” Use “shoes are” and say “high-quality” rather than “quality good quality.” You could also mention that the price changes depending on the brand or type of shoe.

Ejemplo: I usually spend around fifty pounds on a pair of shoes. However, I sometimes pay more for branded trainers because they tend to be higher quality and last longer. I try to buy them during sales to save money.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly and give a logical reason. Replace “fashion level shoes” with “fashionable shoes” and “sensitive to fashion” with “interested in fashion” or “fashion-conscious.” Do not say that you dislike comfortable shoes; explain that you prioritize appearance, while still acknowledging that some comfort is important. Finish the response with a complete idea.

Ejemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes because I’m quite fashion-conscious and I don’t want to wear old-fashioned styles. That said, they still need to be reasonably comfortable, especially if I’m going to wear them for a long time. For me, appearance is the most important factor, but comfort also matters.

× I really like a shopping.

✓ I really like shopping.

Shopping is an uncountable activity noun in this context, so it does not need the article a. Use like + gerund: like shopping.

× I usually buy the shoes maybe one month.

✓ I usually buy shoes about once a month.

Use once a month to express frequency. The definite article the is unnecessary when speaking about shoes in general.

× Absolutely yes because I really like a shopping so I usually buy the shoes maybe one month because trendy is so sensitive so and I'm really interested in

✓ Absolutely, yes. I really like shopping, so I usually buy shoes about once a month because I am very sensitive to fashion and interested in fashion trends.

The original answer contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Use complete sentences and connect related ideas with so and because. Also, interested in must be followed by a noun or gerund, such as interested in fashion trends.

× Recently I bought a really really cool boost because it was I don't have a Dis style design.

✓ Recently, I bought a really cool pair of boots because I did not have this style of footwear.

The answer describes a past purchase, so the verb have should be in the past tense: did not have. Bought is already correctly used in the past tense.

× I bought a really really cool boost ... I really want to try it.

✓ I bought a really cool pair of boots, and I really wanted to try them.

Boots is plural, so use the plural pronoun them rather than it. Because the answer is describing a past purchase, wanted is more consistent than want.

× Absolutely yes recently I bought a really really cool boost because it was I don't have a Dis style design, but I really want to try it because so many people

✓ Absolutely, yes. Recently, I bought a really cool pair of boots because I did not have this style of footwear. I wanted to try them because so many people wear them.

The original response ends with an incomplete clause after because so many people. Add a complete verb phrase, such as wear them. Divide the long response into complete sentences to make the meaning clear.

× Shoes is too expensive.

✓ Shoes are too expensive.

Shoes is a plural noun, so it must take the plural verb are, not is.

× Branded shoes is really quality good quality.

✓ Branded shoes are of good quality.

Branded shoes is plural, so use are. The natural expression is be of good quality, not is quality good quality.

× Probably Probably fifty pounds because shoes is too expensive. I don't know why but I really like branded design shoes because branded shoes is really quality good quality and

✓ Probably fifty pounds, because shoes are quite expensive. I do not know why, but I really like branded shoes because they are of good quality.

The original answer contains repetition and ends with the incomplete conjunction and. Remove the repeated word and finish the final clause with a complete sentence.

× I prefer fashion level shoes because I'm really sensitive to fashion.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I am very interested in fashion.

Fashionable is the correct adjective for describing shoes. Fashion level is not a natural adjective phrase in this context. Interested in fashion is also more natural than sensitive to fashion when expressing a strong preference for fashionable items.

× I don't like comfortable and it doesn't matter it's comfortable for me because if I want

✓ I do not choose shoes just because they are comfortable, and it does not matter whether they are comfortable if I want to look fashionable.

Use whether to introduce an alternative or condition: whether they are comfortable. The conjunction and should connect two complete and logically related clauses.

× Definitely I prefer fashion level shoes because I'm really sensitive to fashion so I don't like old fashioned style so I don't like comfortable and it doesn't matter it's comfortable for me because if I want

✓ Definitely, I prefer fashionable shoes because I am very interested in fashion. I do not like old-fashioned styles, so it does not matter whether the shoes are comfortable if I want to look fashionable.

The original response is one long run-on sentence and ends with the incomplete phrase because if I want. Use separate sentences and complete the final idea with want to look fashionable.