Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and relevant: answer the question about shoes (not suits), state frequency, and finish the thought. Use one clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and finish your sentence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy them a few times a year for special occasions such as friends' weddings. For these events I prefer fashionable shoes because they complete my outfit and make me feel confident.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear reason. Improve coherence by using linking words, correcting collocations and grammar (e.g., "more styles," "than in physical shops"). Limit to maximum five sentences and be more concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are more styles available than in physical shops. In addition, online stores usually offer easy returns, so I can exchange items if the size doesn't fit.

Sugerencia: Be specific and complete your answer. Use correct numbers and currency words, avoid unclear phrases ("hunks"). Give a short reason for your spending habits and finish the sentence. Keep it within five sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about $50 to $60 a month on shoes. I avoid very expensive or luxury items because I see shoes as consumable and prefer to buy reasonably priced, durable pairs.

Sugerencia: Strong answer with clear condition. Improve fluency by polishing phrasing, fixing small grammar issues (article use, agreement) and using linking words for contrast. Keep concise and natural.

Ejemplo: It depends on the occasion. For weddings or company dinners I prefer fashionable shoes to look well-styled; however, for everyday activities I choose comfortable shoes that allow me to walk long distances.

× Yes, I like buying suits and I usually buy it for some occasion like attending wedding of friends.

✓ Yes, I like buying suits and I usually buy them for occasions like attending friends' weddings.

The sentence uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to plural 'suits' (pronoun agreement). Also 'some occasion' should be plural 'occasions' and possessive 'friends' requires apostrophe. Suggest using plural pronoun 'them' and plural nouns for general statements.

× I think a pair of fashionable suites allowed me to have amazing, outstanding outfit that made me feel

✓ I think a pair of fashionable suits allows me to have an amazing, outstanding outfit that makes me feel good.

Several issues: 'suites' should be 'suits' (spelling), 'a pair of suits' is singular so verb should be 'allows' (subject-verb agreement). 'amazing, outstanding outfit' needs an article 'an' and 'made me feel' should match present general statement 'makes me feel' or complete the sentence with an emotion. Use present tense for habitual/general feelings.

× Yes, I always do online shopping in buying shoes because I think more style are available online rather deep in physical shops so I'm also allowed to change the item I bought if I found the size is not suitable for me.

✓ Yes, I always shop online for shoes because I think more styles are available online than in physical shops, and I can also exchange an item I bought if I find the size is not suitable for me.

Use 'shop online' instead of 'do online shopping in buying shoes' (unnatural structure). 'more style are' should be 'more styles are' (plural noun). 'rather deep in physical shops' is incorrect; use 'than in physical shops' for comparison. 'I'm also allowed to change' is passive/odd; use 'I can also exchange'. Tense consistency: 'if I found' should be 'if I find' for present/future possibility.

× I think I spend around fifty five hunks a month on buying shoes of those I frequently buy shoes, I don't spend on items which are too expensive and luxurious because I think you are something consumable and I prefer to buy

✓ I think I spend around fifty-five bucks a month on shoes that I buy frequently. I don't spend on items that are too expensive or luxurious because I think shoes are consumable and I prefer to buy more practical ones.

'fifty five hunks' is incorrect vocabulary; likely 'fifty-five bucks' (or another currency). Sentence run-on; split into two sentences. 'of those I frequently buy shoes' is redundant; simplify to 'shoes that I buy frequently'. 'which'->'that' optional but use 'that are too expensive'. 'you are something consumable' is incorrect pronoun and phrasing; should be 'shoes are consumable'. Finish idea with 'more practical ones'.

× It really depends on what occasion I'm going to attend.

✓ It really depends on the occasion I am going to attend.

Use 'the occasion' or 'which occasion' rather than 'what occasion' in this context. Also 'I'm going to attend' is acceptable but 'the occasion I am going to attend' is more concise and natural.

× If I have some I have to attend some wedding and annual dinner of company, I prefer a fashionable shoe to make me well styled, but for on normal days I prefer comfortable shoes that allows me to walk for a long distance

✓ If I have to attend a wedding or the company's annual dinner, I prefer fashionable shoes to make me look well-styled, but on normal days I prefer comfortable shoes that allow me to walk long distances.

Multiple structure and agreement issues: 'If I have some I have to attend some wedding' is redundant—use 'If I have to attend a wedding'. Use 'the company's annual dinner' for possession. 'a fashionable shoe' -> 'fashionable shoes' (plural) and 'make me look well-styled' is natural. 'for on normal days' -> 'on normal days'. 'shoes that allows' should be 'that allow' (subject-verb agreement). 'walk for a long distance' -> 'walk long distances' (idiomatic plural/general).