Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and use correct tense and word forms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition. For example, say how often you buy shoes (e.g. once every one or two years), why you buy so infrequently, and mention what you prefer to spend money on.

Ejemplo: I don't buy shoes very often. I usually buy new shoes once every one or two years because my current pairs last a long time and I prefer to spend money on other things like travel or gadgets.

Sugerencia: Use correct grammar (present perfect or simple past) and give a specific reason with a linking word. Say whether you have tried it and explain why you avoid online shopping, or mention a condition that would make you try it.

Ejemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I worry about scams and wrong sizes. If I were to buy shoes online, I would choose a trusted retailer with free returns.

Sugerencia: Give a clear amount and explain why, using correct vocabulary and units (e.g. currency). Use linking words to connect your reason for spending that amount, and avoid confusing terms like 'suit' when you mean 'shoes'.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about 3000 to 4000 rupees on a pair of shoes because I prefer comfortable shoes that last longer rather than fashionable ones.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear preference sentence and support it with specific reasons and an example. Use correct noun forms and linking words (for example, 'because' and 'for instance'). Mention activities that make comfort important.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are better for activities like walking or hiking and they don't hurt my feet. For instance, I choose cushioned trainers for long walks.

× No, I didn't like to really buying often offshore because I have one already shoes and I also spend like, uh, one to two years in that sauce. I didn't like to spend the money in like, uh, other things, shoes or something else.

✓ No, I don't really like buying shoes often because I already have a pair, and I also only buy shoes every one to two years. I prefer to spend money on other things.

Problems: sentence structure errors, incorrect verb forms, singular/plural errors, and awkward phrasing. "I didn't like to really buying" mixes past tense "didn't" with an -ing form and is ungrammatical; use present simple "don't" for a habitual preference and "like buying" or "don't really like buying". "offshore" and "in that sauce" are incorrect words likely intended as "often" and "that season/period"; context suggests "often" and "every one to two years." "one already shoes" is wrong word order and number; use "a pair" or "any shoes." The final clause "I didn't like to spend the money in like, uh, other things" should be present tense and rephrased: "I prefer to spend money on other things." Suggestion: use consistent tense (present simple for habits), correct noun phrases (a pair of shoes), and clear adverbs (often); avoid filler words.

× No, I didn't ever bought shoes online because online nowadays became a scammer and I always like to look up physical.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because there are many online scams nowadays, and I always prefer to see shoes in person.

Problems: incorrect past tense formation and tense choice. "didn't ever bought" incorrectly combines auxiliary "didn't" with past form "bought"; use "didn't ever buy" or better "have never bought" for life experience. "online nowadays became a scammer" is ungrammatical and wrong voice; use "there are many online scams" or "online shopping has many scams nowadays." "I always like to look up physical" is unclear; say "I prefer to see shoes in person" or "look at them physically." Suggestion: use present perfect for experience, correct verb forms after auxiliaries, and clearer noun phrases.

× I literally like to spend on shows like 3000 to 4000 because I really like to wear a comfortable suit, not like a designing suit.

✓ I usually spend about 3000 to 4000 on shoes because I like to wear comfortable shoes, not designer ones.

Problems: wrong words and quantifier use. "literally like to spend on shows" has vocabulary errors: "shows" should be "shoes." Use "usually spend about" for typical spending. Currency or units should be clear; keep the number but consider adding a currency if needed. "comfortable suit" and "designing suit" are incorrect; use "comfortable shoes" and "designer ones." Suggestion: correct noun choices, use appropriate quantifiers (usually/about), and parallel structure for contrasting ideas.

× I prefer a comfortable suit because comfortable shoes is like to go in hiking or some else also and does not hurt our legs.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because they are good for hiking and do not hurt my feet.

Problems: subject-verb agreement, articles, and word choice. "a comfortable suit" and later "comfortable shoes is" are inconsistent and ungrammatical: use "comfortable shoes" (plural) and agree the verb: "they are." "like to go in hiking or some else" is awkward; use "good for hiking or other activities." "does not hurt our legs" is wrong body part and agreement; shoes hurt feet, so use "do not hurt my feet" or "your feet." Suggestion: keep number consistent between subject and verb, use correct collocations (go hiking, be good for hiking), and choose the right noun (feet, not legs) and pronoun perspective (my/your/our) to match context.