Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: まず簡潔に質問に直接答え、その後で頻度を明確に説明する練習をしましょう。現在と過去の時制の混同や語順の誤りを避けるため、短くて正確な文を使ってください。例えば“when my shoes break”や“about twice a year”など、頻度表現（once a month, twice a yearなど）を使うと自然に聞こえます。また、文は3文以内に収め、冗長な語句を削ることを意識してください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes when my old ones wear out, which is about twice a year. I prefer trying them on in stores to find the right fit.

Sugerencia: 否定を述べた後に理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。現在完了の否定形（"No, I haven't"）を正しく使い、その後で“usually”や“because”を用いて理由を説明してください。語の重複や不要な挿入を避け、一文でポイントをまとめると明瞭です。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online. I usually go to physical stores because I prefer trying them on to check the fit and comfort.

Sugerencia: 金額や範囲を具体的に示す練習をしてください。家計事情に触れる場合は簡潔に説明し、その上で"reasonable"や"affordable"など適切な語を使ってください。頻度や価格帯を明確に表現すると説得力が増します（例："around $30 to $50"）。文は2～3文でまとめましょう。

Ejemplo: I usually spend around $30 to $50 on a pair of shoes because I use my parents' money and try to buy affordable but good-quality pairs.

Sugerencia: まず好みをはっきり述べ、その理由を簡潔に付け加えてください。理由は具体的に（例えば“cause discomfort or foot problems”）説明し、“however”や“so”などの接続詞で文をつなげると論理的になります。冗長な繰り返しを避け、文法的に正しい形（"I prefer comfortable shoes because they prevent foot problems"）を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable ones can cause discomfort and even foot problems. So I usually choose comfort over style, especially for everyday use.

× Yes, I like to buy shoes.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes.

The phrase 'like to buy' is grammatically acceptable but here the gerund 'buying' is more natural when expressing a general preference. Use the -ing form after 'like' to indicate habit or preference.

× I used I buy the shoes when my shoes broke break.

✓ I used to buy shoes when my shoes broke.

The correct idiom to express a past habitual action is 'used to' followed by the base verb. Remove the repeated words and incorrect present form 'break'; use the past 'broke' or keep 'broke' within the clause 'when my shoes broke.'

× So I buy the shoes as twice thinner.

✓ So I buy shoes twice as often.

The phrase 'twice thinner' is incorrect. To express frequency use 'twice as often.' Also omit the article 'the' before 'shoes' when speaking generally.

× No, I have not when I buy shoes I of I usually go to the shoe store and choose my choose the truth.

✓ No, I have not. When I buy shoes, I usually go to the shoe store and choose them in person.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has extra fragments. 'I have not' should be followed by the past participle if needed ('I have not bought shoes online'), or be a short answer 'No, I have not.' For the rest, use simple present for habitual action: 'I usually go' and refer back to 'shoes' with 'them.' Remove redundant words.

× No, I have not when I buy shoes I of I usually go to the shoe store and choose my choose the truth.

✓ No, I have not. When I buy shoes, I usually go to the shoe store and choose them in person.

Replace repeated and incorrect fragments with the pronoun 'them' to refer to 'shoes.' Avoid duplicating verbs like 'choose my choose' and use a clear phrase 'in person' instead of 'the truth.'

× As a I use my parents money so I want to buy the reasonable shoes.

✓ I use my parents' money, so I try to buy reasonably priced shoes.

Use the possessive form 'parents'' for parental ownership. 'Reasonable shoes' is unnatural; use 'reasonably priced shoes' or 'affordable shoes.' Also use 'try to' to show intention or habit.

× I want to get the fashionable shoes but at the at the not non comfortable shoes we makes some disease for my foot.

✓ I want fashionable shoes, but not shoes that are uncomfortable because they can cause problems with my feet.

Remove duplicate words 'at the at the' and incorrect double negation 'not non.' Use 'uncomfortable' as the adjective. 'Makes some disease for my foot' is unnatural; say 'can cause problems with my feet.' Use plural 'feet' for general meaning.

× So I want to get the comfortable shoes.

✓ So I prefer comfortable shoes.

'Get the comfortable shoes' is grammatical but 'prefer comfortable shoes' is more natural in response to the question about preference. Drop the definite article 'the' when speaking generally.