Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clear and relevant: answer directly, correct word choice, reduce fillers, use one topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Say how often with correct time expressions and explain reason with a linking word. Pronunciation of key words (shoes, months) should be clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes every three months because I work on my feet all day and need comfortable, durable pairs.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer, then support with a specific reason and a linking word. Use correct tense and clearer vocabulary (buy, return, fit). Avoid repetition and fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online once. However, I found the sizing was unreliable, so I prefer buying shoes in person to be sure they fit.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence stating a typical annual budget, use correct time phrases and numbers, and explain the reason with linking words. Keep it brief and precise.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about $300 a year on shoes, because I buy new pairs every three to four months due to heavy wear.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific reason with a linking word. Use natural phrasing (I prefer comfortable shoes because I work long hours) and avoid awkward structures and fillers.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I work long hours on my feet, so comfort is more important than fashion for me.

× Yes I love to buy uh juice every umm 3 month because I have stay and work uh all day and I tie to buy the shirt is suit for me and like.

✓ Yes, I love to buy shoes every three months because I stay and work all day, and I try to buy shirts that suit me and that I like.

Issues: incorrect noun 'juice' instead of 'shoes' (vocabulary), '3 month' should be plural 'three months' (singular/plural), awkward phrasing 'I have stay and work' should be 'I stay and work', 'I tie' is wrong verb form 'I try', 'the shirt is suit for me and like' needs relative clauses and correct verbs. Suggestion: use plural for recurring periods, use correct verbs (stay, try), and link clauses with 'that' to describe shirts. Use clearer word choice and punctuation.

× Yes I have one times to wash a shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have washed a pair of shoes online once.

Problems: 'one times' is incorrect; use 'once' or 'one time'. 'a shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a pair of shoes' or 'a shoe'. Also tense and word order improved: use present perfect 'have washed' for experience. Suggestion: use 'once' for a single occurrence and 'a pair of shoes' for footwear.

× I think on my own opinion I think on the online shop is not umm exactly site.

✓ In my opinion, shopping online is not always reliable.

Problems: redundant phrases 'I think on my own opinion I think', incorrect preposition use 'on the online shop is not exactly site' and awkward noun 'site'. Suggestion: use 'In my opinion' once, and a clear subject and verb 'shopping online is not always reliable' to express the idea.

× I mean not suit size for you because you did you can't tie on.

✓ I mean the sizes may not fit you, so you might not be able to try them on.

Problems: 'not suit size for you' needs passive/verb 'fit', 'you did you can't tie on' is ungrammatical and 'tie on' is wrong verb for trying clothes. Suggestion: use 'fit' for sizes and 'try on' for trying clothing; use modal 'might' to indicate possibility.

× I have spent money for the shoes, uh for annually I have been allowed $300 because I have to change choose every three or four months.

✓ I spend about $300 a year on shoes because I have to replace them every three or four months.

Problems: mixed tenses 'I have spent' with 'for annually I have been allowed' and incorrect phrase 'have been allowed $300'. 'change choose' is incorrect verb choice for replacing shoes. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual spending ('I spend'), say 'about $300 a year', and use 'replace' or 'change' with objects 'them'.

× Well I would say I will prefer comfortable shoes because I have two works.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because I have two jobs.

Problems: awkward modal combination 'would say I will prefer' — simply use 'I prefer'. 'two works' should be 'two jobs'. Suggestion: use simple present for preferences and the correct noun 'job' for employment.

× Then all day I tie something with the shoes is comfortable for me.

✓ Then, all day I wear shoes that are comfortable for me.

Problems: 'I tie something with the shoes' is incorrect; 'tie' is wrong verb. Use 'wear' for using shoes. Also use relative clause 'that are comfortable' and correct continuous meaning. Suggestion: use 'wear' to describe having shoes on and 'comfortable' as adjective with correct placement.