Shoes— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce filler words (uh, um) and correct word choice (use "shoes" not "suits"). Use one linking phrase to connect ideas (e.g., "because" or "when"). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do like buying shoes. I usually buy sandals for everyday use, but I buy sturdy hiking shoes when I plan outdoor activities like picnics or hikes because I need more support and durability.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give a clear reason with one example. Avoid repetition and filler. Use correct verb forms (bought, not brought) and link cause and effect with words like "because" or "so". Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I worry about the quality and sizing. For example, once I ordered clothes that looked different from the photos, so now I prefer to try shoes on in a store before buying.

Sugerencia: Give a clear amount and clarify the time frame (per month, per year, per pair). Use correct currency or say "in my local currency" if unclear. Remove hesitations and explain briefly why you spend that amount (quality, comfort). Stay within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually spend about 3,000 to 4,000 rupees for a pair of shoes. I prefer to pay that much because I look for comfortable, good-quality shoes that last longer and are worth the price.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct preference (fashionable or comfortable) and give a brief reason. Use clear linking words (because, so) and avoid incomplete sentences. Mention a specific example of what you consider comfortable or average to make it concrete.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I'm a student and I need budget-friendly, practical footwear. For instance, I usually choose simple sneakers that fit well and support my feet for daily walking.

× Uh, to be honest, it depends upon a situation.

✓ To be honest, it depends on the situation.

Use 'depends on' not 'depends upon' for natural spoken English and include the article 'the' before 'situation' when referring to a specific situation. Suggestion: say 'depends on the situation' for clarity and correctness.

× Uh, I like buying a suits where I am, uh, preferring to go in uh, some act, uh, outing activities like hiking or any picnic, but uh, all the best, all, uh, basic time, I buy sandals.

✓ I like buying suits for when I go on outings like hiking or picnics, but most of the time I buy sandals.

Remove the incorrect article before 'suits' (use plural without 'a') and simplify awkward phrasing. Use 'for when I go on outings' instead of 'where I am' and 'picnics' plural. Replace 'all the best, all, basic time' with 'most of the time'. Suggestion: keep subjects and verbs clear and use natural collocations (go on outings, buy sandals).

× No, I haven't brought uh shoes online because I had a trust issue uh, and I think, uh, the quality is also not that much, uh, good, uh, what we see at online or what we get uh, lately, So I prefer buying offline or.

✓ No, I haven't bought shoes online because I have trust issues, and I think the quality of what we see online is often not very good, so I prefer buying in stores.

Use 'bought' (past participle) not 'brought'. Use plural 'issues' for a general statement. Use 'online' as adverb and 'in stores' instead of 'offline or'. Clarify word order: 'the quality of what we see online is often not very good'. Suggestion: use correct past participle and clearer nouns/phrases.

× I you till now, I, uh, you daily spend around, uh, 3000 to 4000 on suits, but uh, not uh, mostly because I prefer a standard which is uh, also very comfortable and affordable for me.

✓ Until now, I usually spend around 3000 to 4000 on shoes, but not always, because I prefer ones that are comfortable and affordable for me.

Remove filler words and fix word order. Use 'Until now' or 'So far' and 'usually spend' for habitual action. Replace 'suits' with 'shoes'. 'Prefer ones that are comfortable' is clearer than 'prefer a standard which is'. Suggestion: eliminate extra pronouns and fillers and use concise adjective clauses ('that are comfortable and affordable').

× To be honest, uh, I'm not working and I'm studying for my future, so I have not that much amount for expensive or, uh, fashionable suits and whereas I prefer uh, comfortable or average shoes that fits me and makes my.

✓ To be honest, I'm not working and I'm studying for my future, so I don't have much money for expensive or fashionable shoes, and I prefer comfortable, mid-range shoes that fit me and suit my needs.

Use 'don't have' instead of 'have not' for negative present. Replace 'amount' with 'money'. Use 'shoes' not 'suits'. 'Shoes that fit me' requires plural verb 'fit' not 'fits' because the subject 'shoes' is plural. 'Makes my' is incomplete; replace with 'suit my needs' for a complete idea. Suggestion: use correct negative auxiliary, correct noun choice, and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns.