Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'for me' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary such as 'accessible' instead of 'convenient' and 'resources' can be elaborated.

Ejemplo: No, I usually read ebooks because it's more accessible to me. Since there is no library nearby, reading ebooks allows me to enjoy a wide range of books comfortably at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid starting sentences with 'And'. Also, clarify phrases like 'discover the dictionary new words' to make your meaning clear. Use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Whenever I visit the library, I browse different sections to find my favourite books. I also enjoy the smell of fresh books and like to discover new words in the dictionary. Additionally, I look out for limited edition books.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and clearer expression. Use past tense consistently and avoid incomplete phrases like 'smell of library and new'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I visited the library more often than I do now. I used to explore different sections looking for my favourite novels, especially funny and adventurous ones. In addition, I loved the smell of new books in the library.

Sugerencia: Your answer is thoughtful but can be improved by avoiding filler phrases like 'in my opinion, honestly' and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid vague expressions like 'all sort of kids'.

Ejemplo: I believe most children visit the library at least once because it is important for learning. Chinese kids often go to the library to explore new ideas and gain knowledge.

× No, I often spend my time reading ebooks as it feels its convenient for me to sit at home in a relaxed position on my couch and read a book.

✓ No, I often spend my time reading ebooks as it feels convenient for me to sit at home in a relaxed position on my couch and read a book.

The pronoun 'its' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is 'it' because 'it' is the subject of the clause 'it feels convenient'. Using 'its' (possessive) is incorrect in this context. Remove 'its' to correct the sentence.

× In my area there is no library nearby so I feel like ebooks are the best for me and it can provide me the same resources at home.

✓ In my area there is no library nearby so I feel like ebooks are the best for me and they can provide me the same resources at home.

The pronoun 'it' is used to refer to 'ebooks', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'they' to agree in number with the plural noun 'ebooks'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Whenever I get time to go to the library, I start from section to section looking for my favorite kinds of books.

✓ Whenever I get time to go to the library, I start from section to section looking for my favorite kinds of books.

The phrase 'start from section to section' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'go from section to section' or 'move from section to section'. However, since the instruction is to correct only mistakes that meet the grammar problem list, and preposition use is listed, the correction is to replace 'start from' with 'go from' or 'move from'. But since the original sentence uses 'start from', it is incorrect preposition usage.

× Whenever I get time to go to the library, I start from section to section looking for my favorite kinds of books.

✓ Whenever I get time to go to the library, I go from section to section looking for my favorite kinds of books.

The phrase 'start from section to section' is incorrect. The correct preposition phrase is 'go from section to section' to indicate moving through different sections. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× And I love the smell of fresh and new books.

✓ And I love the smell of fresh, new books.

The phrase 'fresh and new' is redundant and awkward. Using a comma between adjectives 'fresh, new books' is more natural and correct. Also, 'fresh and new' together is repetitive; better to use just 'new' or 'fresh' or separate with a comma.

× I love to see new limited editions and discover the dictionary new words.

✓ I love to see new limited editions and discover new words in the dictionary.

The phrase 'discover the dictionary new words' is incorrect in word order and pronoun use. The correct phrase is 'discover new words in the dictionary'. This corrects the pronoun and word order issue.

× When I was a kid, I visited library more often than now.

✓ When I was a kid, I visited the library more often than now.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. This is an article error and singular/plural issue.

× I used to go from one section to another looking for my favorite kinds of novels.

✓ I used to go from one section to another looking for my favorite kinds of novels.

The preposition usage 'from one section to another' is correct. No correction needed here.

× I used to love funny and adventurous books.

✓ I used to love funny and adventurous books.

No error detected in adjective use here.

× In addition, I love the smell of library and new.

✓ In addition, I love the smell of the library and new books.

The phrase 'smell of library and new' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'smell of the library and new books'. This corrects the pronoun and article usage and completes the phrase.

× In my opinion, honestly I feel like all sort of kids visit the library once in their lifetime.

✓ In my opinion, honestly I feel like all sorts of kids visit the library once in their lifetime.

The phrase 'all sort of kids' is incorrect; it should be 'all sorts of kids' to agree in plural form. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I think Chinese kids often go to library to explore and get new ideas and gain knowledge.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library to explore and get new ideas and gain knowledge.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular, so it requires the definite article 'the'. This is an article error and incorrect use of prepositions.