LibraryPart 1 Informe

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Conversación

Part 1

Examinador

Do you often go to the library?

Candidato

Yes, since I am a student and I need to go to the library to get some books to have some research on it.

Examinador

What do you usually do in the library?

Candidato

So I usually go to library to get some books that I need to prepare for my project or I will study in library when I need to take my exams or tests.

Examinador

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Candidato

Yes, since I seldom watched TV and play when I was small. So instead I will choose to watch some storyboards that was provided in the library.

Examinador

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Candidato

Definitely, since the stress in China is super high and students need to go to library to get some new knowledge. So actually Chinese kids often go to library.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免语法错误,如“have some research on it”应改为“do some research”。同时,回答可以更简洁,避免冗余。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I need to borrow books for my studies and do some research.

What do you usually do in the library?

Puntuación: 70.0

Sugerencia: 回答时应注意冠词使用,如“go to library”应为“go to the library”。句子结构可以更简洁,使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually go to the library to borrow books for my projects, and I also study there when preparing for exams.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 回答中时态和语法错误较多,如“play”应为“played”,“will choose”应为“chose”,“was”应为“were”。建议使用过去时态描述过去的习惯,并且句子更自然。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I rarely watched TV or played outside. Instead, I enjoyed reading storybooks there.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答中应注意冠词使用,如“go to library”应为“go to the library”。表达可以更自然,避免重复“so actually”。

Ejemplo: Definitely. Because of the high academic pressure in China, many children often go to the library to learn new things.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, since I am a student and I need to go to the library to get some books to have some research on it.

Yes, since I am a student and I need to go to the library to get some books to do some research on them.

research是不可数名词,不能用复数形式。原句中使用了some research on it,it指代不明确,且research不需要冠词,应该用do research。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× So I usually go to library to get some books that I need to prepare for my project or I will study in library when I need to take my exams or tests.

So I usually go to the library to get some books that I need to prepare for my project or I will study in the library when I need to take my exams or tests.

library前缺少定冠词the,表示特指图书馆。英语中表示特定场所时通常需要the。

Past tense issue

× Yes, since I seldom watched TV and play when I was small.

Yes, since I seldom watched TV and played when I was small.

句中时态应保持一致,既然用了过去时watched,play也应改为过去时played。

Past tense issue

× So instead I will choose to watch some storyboards that was provided in the library.

So instead I chose to watch some storyboards that were provided in the library.

句子描述过去的行为,should用过去时chose。关系从句中主语storyboards为复数,谓语动词应为were。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Definitely, since the stress in China is super high and students need to go to library to get some new knowledge.

Definitely, since the stress in China is super high and students need to go to the library to get some new knowledge.

go to library缺少定冠词the,表示特指图书馆,应加the。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× So actually Chinese kids often go to library.

So actually Chinese kids often go to the library.

同上,go to library缺少定冠词the,应加the。

Vocabulario

HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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