Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your past habit and your current intention.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library now, but when I was in college, I used to visit it regularly to read books and do my homework. However, I would like to visit the library again someday to read more books.

Sugerencia: Use consistent verb tenses and add linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide specific details to enrich your response.

Ejemplo: I usually do my homework in the library because it is quiet. Besides that, I also meet my friends there to discuss our assignments and projects.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, you can add a linking word and a little more detail to make it sound more natural and complete.

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I didn't have a chance to go to a library because there were no libraries in our hometown. Therefore, I had to rely on books at home or school.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and articles. Also, avoid vague statements by being more specific or explaining your observation clearly.

Ejemplo: Although I don't personally know any Chinese kids, based on my observation, I think many Chinese children often go to the library because they like to study.

× Right now I don't go open to the library, but when I was in college I used to read books and they're ready to do my homework, but I like to visit one day to read some books.

✓ Right now I don't go to the library, but when I was in college I used to read books and they were ready to do my homework, but I would like to visit one day to read some books.

The phrase 'go open to the library' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go to the library'. Also, 'they're ready to do my homework' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'I was ready to do my homework' or 'I used to do my homework'. The modal verb 'would like to' is appropriate for expressing a future desire. The sentence needs correction to use proper verb forms and prepositions.

× I usually did my homework because it's quiet. I also go there to meet my friends and discuss about our assignments and projects.

✓ I usually do my homework because it's quiet. I also go there to meet my friends and discuss our assignments and projects.

The use of 'did' suggests past tense, but the question asks about usual activities, which require present tense 'do'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need the preposition 'about'. The correct phrase is 'discuss our assignments and projects'.

× When I was a kid, I didn't have a chance to go to a library because in our hometown we don't have libraries.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't have a chance to go to a library because in our hometown we didn't have libraries.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. Since the time referred to is in the past, 'don't have' should be 'didn't have' to maintain tense consistency. The plural 'libraries' is correct here.

× I don't know any Chinese kid but based on my observation I think Chinese kid go off into library because they like to study.

✓ I don't know any Chinese kids but based on my observation I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they like to study.

The singular 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to agree with 'any' and the plural verb 'go'. 'Go off into library' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to the library'. Also, 'often' is added to express frequency appropriately.