Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammar mistakes. Also, give a direct answer first, then add supporting details with linking words. For example, say "No, I don't often go to the library because my band is usually very busy. Instead, I prefer reading books on my phone or iPad."

Ejemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because my band is usually very busy. Instead, I prefer reading books on my phone or iPad, which is more convenient for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and has grammar errors. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain your preference. For example, "I usually sit alone and read books quietly because I prefer not to be disturbed by others."

Ejemplo: I usually sit alone and read books quietly because I prefer not to be disturbed by others when I am in the library.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to give a clear and complete response with supporting details. For example, "No, I didn't go to the library as a child. Instead, my siblings and I usually read books at home that we bought."

Ejemplo: No, I didn't go to the library as a child. Instead, my siblings and I usually read books at home that we bought.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons. For example, "Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they value education and like to read."

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because they value education and like to read.

× I I buy books.

✓ I buy books.

The repetition of 'I' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence structure. Remove the extra 'I' to correct the sentence.

× I don't I really go out.

✓ I don't really go out.

The extra 'I' after 'don't' is incorrect and breaks the sentence structure. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× My band usually so busy so I I never get time to go out.

✓ My band is usually so busy that I never get time to go out.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' and has repeated 'I'. Adding 'is' and removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Well I went there once and I stare and sit alone with books and chat everything and I saw someone but I got I rather sit along and wait and not bother by anyone.

✓ Well, I went there once and I stared and sat alone with books and chatted with everyone. I saw someone but I would rather sit alone and wait and not be bothered by anyone.

The verbs 'stare', 'sit', and 'chat' should be in past tense to match 'went'. Also, 'got I rather sit along' is incorrect; it should be 'I would rather sit alone'. 'Not bother by anyone' should be passive 'not be bothered by anyone'.

× No, I I didn't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The repeated 'I' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence.

× We usually just buy books and read at home with my brother and sister.

✓ We usually just buy books and read at home with my brother and sister.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× I never go out to eat and then I go.

✓ I never went out to eat and then I went.

Since the question is about the past ('when you were a kid'), the verbs should be in past tense: 'went' instead of 'go'.

× Well, I would rather they go a lot to the library 'cause they are smart people, but like us.

✓ Well, I wish they would go a lot to the library because they are smart people, unlike us.

'I would rather they go' is incorrect; 'I wish they would go' expresses the intended meaning better. Also, 'like us' should be 'unlike us' to show contrast.