Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer e redundancy ache, ar linking words use kora hoy nai. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korte, linking words use korte, ebong kichu specific example dite. Apni 'I don't often go to the library because people are busy with work and studies. Instead, I usually read ebooks online, which are easily accessible.' erokom korte paren.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library because people are usually busy with work and studies. Instead, I prefer reading ebooks online, as there are many available and it's very convenient.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek bar repeat hocche. Apni chesta korun prothom e direct answer dite, tarpor linking words diye supporting details add korte. Specific example dite paren jemon kon dhoroner boi poren ba library te ki ki resources pawa jay.

Ejemplo: I usually use the library to concentrate on my studies because it is quiet and has many useful resources. For example, I often borrow reference books that help me understand my subjects better.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e grammar o sentence structure onek improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun prothome direct answer dite, tarpor linking words diye supporting details add korte. Specific example dite paren jemon apni ki dhoroner outdoor activities korten ba barite kon dhoroner boi chilo.

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I didn't go to the library because I preferred playing outside. Also, my parents had many books at home, so I read those instead.

Sugerencia: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek bar repeat hocche. Apni chesta korun prothom e direct answer dite, tarpor linking words diye supporting details add korte. Specific example dite paren jemon school gulo ki dhoroner library activities kore ba keno library te jawa important.

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because schools encourage them to do so. The library provides a quiet place where they can concentrate better on their studies.

× Not actually, I don't often go library because in this situation people are very busy about their works and about their, uh, studies.

✓ Not actually, I don't often go to the library because in this situation people are very busy with their work and their studies.

The preposition 'to' is required after 'go' when referring to a place like 'library'. Also, 'busy about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'busy with'. 'Works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks or jobs collectively.

× So I can, I, uh, we can easily read books from online and there are a number of ebook has online available.

✓ So I can, I, uh, we can easily read books online and there are a number of ebooks available online.

The phrase 'a number of ebook has online available' is incorrect. 'Ebook' should be plural 'ebooks' to match 'a number of'. Also, 'has' is incorrect here; it should be omitted. 'From online' is better expressed as 'online'.

× So I, I often reading book from online.

✓ So I often read books online.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used after 'often'. The correct form is the base verb 'read' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally.

× I think a library is really essential for concentration and whenever you go library you can you can read many kind of books where you can find lots of resource which helpful for you as well as libraries environment was outstanding for working your study.

✓ I think a library is really essential for concentration and whenever you go to the library you can read many kinds of books where you can find lots of resources which are helpful for you. Also, the library's environment is outstanding for studying.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'go' when referring to 'library'. 'Many kind of books' should be 'many kinds of books' to be grammatically correct. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources'. 'Which helpful' needs the verb 'are'. 'Libraries environment' should be 'library's environment'. 'Working your study' is incorrect; 'studying' is the correct form.

× Actually when I was kid I didn't go library because I that time I engaging outdoor activities and I preferred to playing or staying with home because my parents had a good lots of books for at my.

✓ Actually, when I was a kid I didn't go to the library because at that time I was engaged in outdoor activities and I preferred playing or staying at home because my parents had a lot of books at home.

'Was kid' should be 'was a kid'. 'Go library' needs 'to' as in 'go to the library'. 'I engaging' should be past continuous 'I was engaged'. 'Preferred to playing' should be 'preferred playing'. 'Staying with home' should be 'staying at home'. 'A good lots of books for at my' is incorrect; correct is 'a lot of books at home'.

× Yes, number of Chinese kids, they prefer to go library because there are schools encourage students to go library because it's really convenient for other and also whenever they go library they can easily concentrate about their study.

✓ Yes, a number of Chinese kids prefer to go to the library because schools encourage students to go to the library since it's really convenient for them. Also, whenever they go to the library, they can easily concentrate on their studies.

'Number of' needs the article 'a' as in 'a number of'. 'Go library' requires 'to' as in 'go to the library'. 'There are schools encourage' is incorrect; it should be 'schools encourage'. 'Convenient for other' should be 'convenient for them'. 'Concentrate about' should be 'concentrate on'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' when referring generally.