Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoiding unnecessary phrases like "to be friendly and not nowadays." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't go to the library often nowadays. However, when I was studying mechanical engineering, I used to visit the library frequently to borrow textbooks from different authors. This helped me cover the entire syllabus before exams effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and could be more coherent. Use linking words like 'first' and 'then' properly, and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific about your activities in the library.

Ejemplo: First, I find the books that are relevant to my syllabus. Then, I look for a quiet spot to study. I usually read the books carefully and take notes to help me understand the material better.

Sugerencia: Your answer includes many fillers and is somewhat repetitive. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid unnecessary hesitation sounds and keep your answer concise.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child. After school, my friends and I usually played outside, shared snacks, or chatted instead of visiting the library.

Sugerencia: Your answer is vague and repetitive. Try to give a more structured response with a clear opinion or explanation. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid repeating the same phrases.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but generally, whether children go to the library depends on their interests and needs. Some kids might visit to study or read, while others may prefer different activities.

× I wanted to go to there to get the textbooks from different authors

✓ I wanted to go there to get the textbooks from different authors

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'there' because 'there' already indicates a place. Using 'to there' is incorrect; simply use 'go there'. This improves sentence fluency and correctness.

× I will find outs required books as per my syllabus or studying structure.

✓ I will find out the required books as per my syllabus or study structure.

The verb phrase should be 'find out' (without 's') because 'I' is singular first person and 'find out' is a phrasal verb. Also, 'required books' needs the definite article 'the' to specify particular books. 'Studying structure' is better expressed as 'study structure' for clarity.

× Then I will look for some quiet place over there.

✓ Then I will look for some quiet place there.

The phrase 'over there' is informal and redundant here. Simply 'there' is sufficient and more natural in this context.

× Then I can refer those books or I can make some notes to improve myself because sometimes I just need to get some quiet.

✓ Then I can refer to those books or I can make some notes to improve myself because sometimes I just need to get some quiet.

The verb 'refer' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating consulting something. Also, 'get some quiet' is informal; however, it is acceptable in spoken English. The main correction is adding 'to' after 'refer'.

× we all kids usually enjoying by playing together or sharing snacks or just talking to each other like that.

✓ we all kids usually enjoyed playing together or sharing snacks or just talking to each other like that.

The verb 'enjoying' is incorrectly used here; the past tense 'enjoyed' fits the past context. Also, 'by playing' is unnecessary; 'enjoyed playing' is correct. This aligns the verb tense with the past time frame.

× I even do not know about anyone's preference because, you know, it's all depends.

✓ I do not even know about anyone's preference because, you know, it all depends.

The phrase 'I even do not know' is awkward; 'I do not even know' is the correct word order. Also, 'it's all depends' is incorrect; 'it all depends' is correct because 'depends' is the verb and 'it' is the subject without contraction here.

× Maybe some of the kids may go if they want to do something over there and otherwise and they won't go it.

✓ Maybe some of the kids may go if they want to do something there; otherwise, they won't go.

The conjunction usage is incorrect and redundant. 'And otherwise and they won't go it' is ungrammatical. Using a semicolon or period and 'otherwise' as a transition improves clarity. Also, 'go it' is incorrect; 'go' alone suffices.