Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "busy work schedule and the personal schedule"; instead, say "busy work and personal commitments." Also, use linking words like 'but' to connect ideas smoothly. Try to limit your answer to 4-5 sentences for better effectiveness.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library nowadays because of my busy work and personal commitments. But when I was a child, I used to visit the library daily to read novels, fiction, and other articles. This habit helped me improve my knowledge, and I really enjoyed those times.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many hesitations and lacks fluency. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words such as 'for example' or 'also'. This will make your response more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: In the library, I usually spend most of my time reading fiction and novels because I find them very interesting. I also read articles to keep myself updated with current events. When I was a child, I especially loved reading novels.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and hesitations. Try to speak more confidently and avoid filler words. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity, for example, say 'I was allowed to read novels' instead of 'I allowed re uh, reading a novel.' Use linking words like 'after school' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: When I was a kid, I used to go to the library every day after school. I was allowed to read novels there, and I would borrow new books to read in a quiet environment for about half an hour daily.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. For example, 'because of whether they can increase their imagination power' is confusing. Try to use clearer expressions and linking words like 'so' or 'which helps' to explain reasons. Also, be specific about habits and benefits to make your answer more effective.

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library. They spend a lot of time there, which helps improve their reading skills and knowledge. They also enjoy storybooks, which helps to increase their imagination and creativity.

× Nowadays, I don't have enough time to go to library because of my busy work schedule and the personal schedule.

✓ Nowadays, I don't have enough time to go to the library because of my busy work schedule and my personal schedule.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the personal schedule' should be 'my personal schedule' to correctly indicate possession.

× However, when I was a child, I used to go to library every day and spend time to read a lot of novels, fictions and other articles.

✓ However, when I was a child, I used to go to the library every day and spend time reading a lot of novels, fiction and other articles.

Again, 'library' is a specific place, so 'the' is needed. Also, 'spend time to read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'spend time reading'. Additionally, 'fictions' is uncountable and should be 'fiction'.

× However, when I was a child, I used to go to library every day and spend time to read a lot of novels, fictions and other articles.

✓ However, when I was a child, I used to go to the library every day and spend time reading a lot of novels, fiction and other articles.

After 'spend time', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'spend time reading' is correct instead of 'spend time to read'.

× I usually spend more time on a reading, uh, uh, more time in the reading, uh, fiction and a novel, uh, because it's really interesting for me.

✓ I usually spend more time reading fiction and novels because they are really interesting to me.

The phrase 'on a reading' and 'in the reading' are incorrect. The correct expression is 'spend time reading'. Also, 'a novel' should be plural 'novels' to match 'fiction'. 'Interesting for me' should be 'interesting to me'.

× Sometimes I also read articles, uh, which helps me to, uh, learn the current updates.

✓ Sometimes I also read articles, which help me to learn the current updates.

'Articles' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to agree in number.

× Sometimes I also read articles, uh, which helps me to, uh, learn the current updates.

✓ Sometimes I also read articles, which help me to learn the current updates.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'articles' (plural), so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'.

× When I was a kid, I used to go to library every day because I allowed re uh, reading a novel.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to go to the library every day because I was allowed to read a novel.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'allowed re uh, reading' is incorrect; it should be 'was allowed to read'.

× When I was a kid, I used to go to library every day because I allowed re uh, reading a novel.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to go to the library every day because I was allowed to read a novel.

The verb 'allowed' needs to be in the past passive form 'was allowed' to correctly express permission in the past.

× I would visit the library or uh, after my school days and uh, borrow new books and spend half an hour every day to read in a quiet environment.

✓ I would visit the library after my school days, borrow new books, and spend half an hour every day reading in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'or uh, after my school days' is unclear and unnecessary. Also, 'spend half an hour every day to read' should be 'spend half an hour every day reading'.

× I would visit the library or uh, after my school days and uh, borrow new books and spend half an hour every day to read in a quiet environment.

✓ I would visit the library after my school days, borrow new books, and spend half an hour every day reading in a quiet environment.

After 'spend time', the verb should be in '-ing' form, so 'spend half an hour every day reading' is correct instead of 'to read'.

× Kids spend most of their time in library.

✓ Kids spend most of their time in the library.

'Library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× Because of that, they can improve their reading skills, their knowledge level and they can broaden their perspective as well.

✓ Because of that, they can improve their reading skills, their knowledge level, and broaden their perspective as well.

The conjunction 'and' should connect parallel elements without repeating the subject 'they' unnecessarily.

× They are also spending more time on storybooks because of whether they can increase their imagination power.

✓ They are also spending more time on storybooks so that they can increase their imagination power.

The phrase 'because of whether' is incorrect. The correct conjunction to express purpose is 'so that'.