Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library these days because I am preparing for the iOS exam. It helps me focus better, especially when I see others studying around me.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be more specific about what you study and why the library environment helps.

Ejemplo: I usually study subjects that require a lot of concentration, such as math or programming, in the library because it provides a calm and quiet environment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good in content but has some repetition and filler words. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be concise and clear.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, my dad worked at the local library, so I often went there with him. I read many books and even have some pictures of those visits in my album.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to organize your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to develop good study habits and focus on learning from a young age.

× Actually, yes, I often are trying to go to the library these days because I am preparing for the iOS exam and I need to study harder than usual.

✓ Actually, yes, I am often trying to go to the library these days because I am preparing for the iOS exam and I need to study harder than usual.

The phrase 'I often are trying' is incorrect because 'are' does not agree with the singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I am often trying' where 'am' is the correct auxiliary verb for 'I' and 'trying' is the present participle. Also, the adverb 'often' should be placed before the verb phrase for natural English word order.

× And uh, it's also helped me to be focused and umm, by seeing other people are studying too.

✓ And uh, it's also helped me to stay focused by seeing other people studying too.

The phrase 'by seeing other people are studying too' is awkward. The correct form is 'by seeing other people studying too' where 'studying' is the gerund form used after 'seeing'. Also, 'to be focused' is better expressed as 'to stay focused' for natural English.

× I usually try to study at a library, especially some of the subjects that require to be more concentrate.

✓ I usually try to study in a library, especially some of the subjects that require more concentration.

The preposition 'at' is less appropriate than 'in' when referring to studying inside a library. Also, 'require to be more concentrate' is incorrect; the verb 'require' should be followed by a noun or gerund, so 'more concentration' is correct.

× And need to be in a calm and quiet area.

✓ And I need to be in a calm and quiet area.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'I' clarifies who needs to be in a calm and quiet area, making the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× When I was a child, my dad used to work at a library in my town and I, umm, and I used to go with him and, and I read a lot of books at that time.

✓ When I was a child, my dad used to work at a library in my town and I used to go with him and read a lot of books at that time.

The repeated 'and I' is redundant and interrupts the sentence flow. Removing the extra 'and I' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× And I, I, and I also have some pictures in my album at the library.

✓ And I also have some pictures in my album from the library.

The phrase 'in my album at the library' is confusing. It is clearer to say 'in my album from the library' to indicate the pictures are related to the library. Also, removing repeated 'I' improves clarity.

× I think Chinese kids are very smart and genius and they are so that umm, in that case their parents would put this habit on them to go to the library and study hard and learn and educate them from that age.

✓ I think Chinese kids are very smart and talented, and in that case, their parents would instill this habit in them to go to the library, study hard, and learn from a young age.

The word 'genius' is a noun and should not be used as an adjective here; 'talented' is more appropriate. The phrase 'put this habit on them' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'instill this habit in them'. Also, 'educate them from that age' is awkward; 'learn from a young age' is clearer and more natural.