Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I think it's no' không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading online on my phone. However, sometimes when I have free time, I go to the library with my friends to study or read books.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'umm'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

Ejemplo: In the library, I usually read books or do my homework, especially when I have free periods at school. I often go there with my friends to study and learn new things.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ như 'because I I'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't often go to the library as a child because I found it hard to concentrate on books. Instead, I preferred reading online or listening to someone read to me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I say it yes' và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library. Parents in Asian countries usually encourage their children to learn new things from a young age to improve their skills and knowledge.

× I prefer reading online more than reading by books.

✓ I prefer reading online more than reading books.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used before 'books'. We say 'reading books' without a preposition. Using 'by' here is ungrammatical.

× Yeah to read something new in my phone rather than go to the library or but sometimes when I have free time, I usually go with my friends to the library.

✓ Yeah, to read something new on my phone rather than go to the library, but sometimes when I have free time, I usually go with my friends to the library.

The correct preposition to use with 'phone' when referring to reading or using it is 'on', not 'in'. Also, the sentence needed commas for clarity.

× I usually read books or do homework when I have spare time at school that umm especially when sometime I don't have a class in my school.

✓ I usually read books or do homework when I have spare time at school, especially when sometimes I don't have a class at my school.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'my school' when referring to classes; 'at my school' is correct. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'.

× So I usually go to the library with my friends to do our homework and learn something new.

✓ So I usually go to the library with my friends to do our homework and learn something new.

This sentence is correct; no preposition errors found.

× I usually read online or someone speak to me but I don't really like to go to a library.

✓ I usually read online or someone speaks to me, but I don't really like to go to a library.

The verb 'speak' needs to be in third person singular form 'speaks' to agree with 'someone'. Also, a comma is needed before 'but'.

× I think parents in Asian countries that they want their children to learn something new at a young age.

✓ I think parents in Asian countries want their children to learn something new at a young age.

The phrase 'that they want' is redundant and incorrect here. The correct structure is 'parents want' without 'that they'.

× I mean they want their child could improve their skill when they were.

✓ I mean they want their child to be able to improve their skills when they are young.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and incomplete structure. 'Child' should be followed by 'to be able to' or 'could' with 'to' for correct infinitive form. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' and 'when they were' is incomplete; 'when they are young' is clearer.