Library— Part 1 Informe
Conversación
Part 1
Examinador
Do you often go to the library?
Candidato
Of course I do. I like to go to libraries and nowadays I have to do some AI based financial project, so I often go to the library.
Examinador
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidato
I read book about artificial intelligence and finance to make my project perfect. So usually just study and read in library.
Examinador
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidato
Of course I did, because my mother always brings me to the library. Sorry. My mother always takes me to the library to study with my mom and it was quite great. I liked it.
Examinador
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidato
Well, actually I'm Korean and I don't know. Actually, in Korea kids don't go to the library. Actually, they go to cafe to study.
Evaluación
Total
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
Puntuación: 75.0Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 문장 연결이 조금 더 부드럽게 이루어질 수 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'because'나 'since' 같은 연결어를 사용하여 이유를 명확히 하면 좋겠습니다.
Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I am currently working on an AI-based financial project that requires extensive research.
What do you usually do in the library?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 답변이 간결하지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'read book' 대신 'read books' 또는 'read a book'을 사용하고, 문장 연결을 자연스럽게 해야 합니다.
Ejemplo: Usually, I study and read books about artificial intelligence and finance to improve my project.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 중복된 표현과 어색한 문장 구조가 있습니다. 'brings'와 'takes' 중 하나만 사용하고, 문장을 간결하게 정리하는 것이 좋습니다.
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother often took me to the library to study together, and I really enjoyed those times.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 'Actually'를 너무 자주 사용하여 답변이 반복적이고 자연스럽지 않습니다. 또한 질문에 직접적으로 답변하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ejemplo: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Korea, children usually don't go to the library; instead, they prefer studying in cafes.
Gramática
× I read book about artificial intelligence and finance to make my project perfect.
✓ I read books about artificial intelligence and finance to make my project perfect.
The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple items in general. When talking about more than one item, the plural form is required.
× So usually just study and read in library.
✓ So I usually just study and read in the library.
The sentence lacks a subject and the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Adding 'I' as the subject and 'the' before 'library' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically complete.
× because my mother always brings me to the library.
✓ because my mother always brought me to the library.
The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the past tense 'brought' should be used instead of the present tense 'brings'.
× Sorry. My mother always takes me to the library to study with my mom and it was quite great.
✓ Sorry. My mother always took me to the library to study with her and it was quite great.
Using 'my mom' again is redundant and inconsistent. Replacing it with the pronoun 'her' avoids repetition and clarifies the meaning.
× So usually just study and read in library.
✓ So I usually just study and read in the library.
The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener.
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