Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid contractions like 'yeah' in formal speaking and correct phrases like 'started to preparing' to 'started preparing'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Ejemplo: Recently, I have been going to the library because I started preparing for the IELTS exam. I usually go with my friend so that we can learn from our mistakes and help each other improve.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid redundancy. Also, say 'mock tests' without 'this' and improve sentence flow.

Ejemplo: As I mentioned before, we mostly go to the library to prepare for exams. We usually do mock tests there to improve our English skills and get ready for the official tests.

Sugerencia: Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear reasons. Avoid informal phrases like 'Absolutely no' and use proper conjunctions. Also, correct grammar such as 'prefer to hang out' and 'we didn't have a library'.

Ejemplo: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred hanging out with my friends. Besides, there was no library in my neighborhood or city.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit vague and informal. Try to be more specific and use formal language. Also, avoid phrases like 'person itself' and use 'depends on the individual'.

Ejemplo: That is an interesting question. I think it mostly depends on the individual whether they want to go to the library to study, read, or spend time with their phone or friends.

× Recently, yeah, 'cause when I started to preparing for the ILC exam, I asked my friend to go with me and just learn from our mistakes and teach each other.

✓ Recently, yeah, 'cause when I started preparing for the ILC exam, I asked my friend to go with me and just learn from our mistakes and teach each other.

The phrase 'started to preparing' is incorrect because after 'start' we use either the gerund (-ing form) or the infinitive without 'to'. The correct form is 'started preparing'. This is a common verb + -ing form error.

× How I mentioned before, we mostly go to the libraries because of these preparation and we usually do this mock tests to improve our level of English and to be ready for the official tests.

✓ As I mentioned before, we mostly go to the library because of this preparation and we usually do these mock tests to improve our level of English and to be ready for the official tests.

The word 'libraries' should be singular 'library' because it refers to a general place. 'These preparation' is incorrect; 'preparation' is uncountable and should be 'this preparation'. 'This mock tests' is incorrect; 'tests' is plural so it should be 'these mock tests'. Correct use of singular/plural and demonstratives is important.

× Absolutely no 'cause I prefer to hang out with my friends than just spending my time reading some books and we just had no library I guess in our neighborhood or just around our city.

✓ Absolutely not, 'cause I prefer to hang out with my friends rather than just spend my time reading some books and we just had no library, I guess, in our neighborhood or just around our city.

The phrase 'Absolutely no' is incorrect; it should be 'Absolutely not' to negate properly. Also, 'prefer to hang out... than just spending' is incorrect; after 'prefer... than' the verb should be in base form 'spend'. Modal verb usage and verb form after 'prefer' need correction.

× It is an interesting question 'cause I guess it mostly depends on the person itself, whether he wants to go there to study or read something or to just have a time with phone or friends.

✓ It is an interesting question 'cause I guess it mostly depends on the person themselves, whether they want to go there to study or read something or just spend time with their phone or friends.

The reflexive pronoun 'itself' is incorrectly used for 'person'; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves' for singular they. Also, 'have a time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spend time'. Pronoun agreement and correct collocations are important here.