Part 1
Examinador
Do you often go to the library?
Candidato
No, I often go to the library. I usually use my phone to look books.
Examinador
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidato
In the library I will usually boil a book or in reading a book in there.
Examinador
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidato
Yeah, but another time I will go to the library when I in the school because the teacher will take me to reading.
Examinador
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidato
In my mind and the real truth is yes, because the Chinese kids are need to prepare their Tasker our quieter so they will go to the library.
Do you often go to the library?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在矛盾,先说不去图书馆,后又说经常去,表达不清晰。建议回答时要直接回答问题,并且句子结构要正确,避免语法错误。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books there.
What do you usually do in the library?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和用词错误,如“boil a book”不合适。建议使用正确的动词表达,并且句子要简洁明了。
Ejemplo: In the library, I usually read books or study quietly.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 句子结构混乱,时态使用不当,表达不清晰。建议使用简单的过去时态,句子结构清晰。
Ejemplo: Yes, I went to the library when I was at school because my teacher took us there to read.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 表达不流畅,语法错误较多,词汇使用不当。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点,并注意词汇的准确性。
Ejemplo: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and prepare for their homework quietly.
× I usually use my phone to look books.
✓ I usually use my phone to look at books.
这里的 'books' 是复数,动词 'look' 后面需要加介词 'at' 来表示查看某物,且 'look books' 是不正确的搭配,应为 'look at books'。
× In the library I will usually boil a book or in reading a book in there.
✓ In the library, I usually borrow a book or read a book there.
这里 'will usually boil a book' 中 'boil' 是错误单词,应为 'borrow',且 'will usually' 不符合习惯表达,描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时 'usually borrow'。另外 'in reading a book in there' 结构不正确,应改为 'read a book there'。
× Yeah, but another time I will go to the library when I in the school because the teacher will take me to reading.
✓ Yeah, but sometimes I went to the library when I was in school because the teacher took me to read.
这里描述过去的动作,应使用过去时态 'went' 和 'was',而不是将来时 'will go'。'take me to reading' 结构不正确,应为 'took me to read'。
× In my mind and the real truth is yes, because the Chinese kids are need to prepare their Tasker our quieter so they will go to the library.
✓ In my mind and the real truth is yes, because Chinese kids need to prepare their tasks quietly, so they go to the library.
'are need' 是错误搭配,应为 'need'。'Tasker' 应为复数 'tasks'。'our quieter' 语法错误,应为副词 'quietly'。此外,描述习惯动作用一般现在时 'go'。