Library— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is too long and contains some unclear and repetitive phrases. Try to be more concise and clear, avoid negative self-description, and directly answer the question with a topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because my home is being renovated, so I don't have a quiet place to study. Therefore, I use the library to complete my homework and additional study tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and contains filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Provide specific details about the activities you do in the library.

Ejemplo: In the library, I usually focus on completing my college assignments. Additionally, I spend time reading extra materials related to my courses to enhance my understanding.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat confusing. Use past tense correctly and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: No, I did not go to the library independently when I was a kid. However, during school, our teacher would take us to the library where we read fictional books.

Sugerencia: Avoid speculation and unclear statements. If you are unsure, say so clearly. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide a concise response.

Ejemplo: I am not sure about the habits of Chinese children regarding libraries. However, I saw a movie set in China where children often visited the library, so it might be common there.

× Yes, I told you that me every day as I am stupid so I have to study a lot and nowadays my home is my home is renovating so I don't have a global space in my home where I can study.

✓ Yes, I told you that I study every day as I am stupid so I have to study a lot and nowadays my home is renovating so I don't have a global space in my home where I can study.

The phrase 'I told you that me every day' is incorrect because 'me' is an object pronoun and cannot be used as the subject of the clause. It should be 'I' to correctly function as the subject. Also, 'my home is my home is renovating' is repetitive; it should be 'my home is renovating'.

× That's why I go to library to do my homework and do my some extra work.

✓ That's why I go to the library to do my homework and do some extra work.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'do my some extra work' is incorrect; 'some' should not be preceded by 'my' in this context.

× As I mentioned you earlier, as I am student, so I have to do my homework of my college that uh, so particular I do my, uh, college work and apart from that, I also do my extra works that is related to my study.

✓ As I mentioned to you earlier, as I am a student, I have to do my college homework; in particular, I do my college work and apart from that, I also do extra work related to my studies.

The phrase 'mentioned you' is missing the preposition 'to'. 'As I am student' lacks the article 'a' before 'student'. 'Homework of my college' is better expressed as 'college homework'. 'Extra works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here. 'That is related to my study' should be 'related to my studies' for correct plural and noun form.

× No, I don't go to library when I'm kid, but definitely I go to my school and I have children and my school there's a particular period where ma'am take us to the library and we read fictional books there.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid, but definitely I went to my school and there was a particular period when the ma'am took us to the library and we read fictional books there.

The question is about past habits, so past tense should be used: 'didn't go' instead of 'don't go', 'was' instead of 'am' for 'kid', 'went' instead of 'go' for school, 'there was' instead of 'there's', 'when' instead of 'where' for time reference, and 'took' instead of 'take' for past action.

× Well I don't have a knowledge about Chinese but recently I watched a movie which is based on the China.

✓ Well, I don't have knowledge about Chinese people but recently I watched a movie which is based on China.

'A knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not take an article here. 'Chinese' alone is ambiguous; 'Chinese people' clarifies the meaning. 'Based on the China' is incorrect; 'based on China' is correct without 'the'.

× So in that series most of the children are like to go in the library.

✓ So in that series, most of the children like to go to the library.

The phrase 'are like to go in the library' is incorrect. The correct form is 'like to go to the library'. 'Go in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating destination.

× Maybe in China gets usually go library but I am not pretty sure about.

✓ Maybe in China, kids usually go to the library but I am not pretty sure about it.

The sentence lacks a subject ('kids') and uses incorrect word order. 'Gets usually go library' is incorrect; it should be 'kids usually go to the library'. Also, 'not pretty sure about' should be 'not pretty sure about it' to complete the phrase.