List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and avoid redundancy. For example, directly say you make a shopping list to organize your purchases and control spending. Also, avoid unclear phrases like "buy an program on the calendar."

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. It also ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain that you make a list at the start of the semester to track completed and pending tasks, ensuring everything is done on time.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list at the beginning of the semester. This helps me keep track of the tasks I have completed and those I still need to do, so I can finish everything by the end of the month.

Sugerencia: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate linking words. For example, explain that some people may not like lists because they have good memories or fewer tasks, so they don't need lists. Avoid unclear phrases like "a very full memory."

Ejemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or they don't have many tasks to do each day. Therefore, they can organize their activities without writing them down.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and coherence. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, say you write some tasks in a journal and others on your phone, depending on when you plan to do them. Avoid unclear and fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: I organize my tasks in two ways. Some are written in my journal for long-term plans, while daily tasks I write on my phone because they are easier to update and check.

× Yes, I do make a list almost for everything of my activities that I have to do.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for almost all the activities that I have to do.

The preposition 'for' should be used before 'almost all the activities' to indicate purpose or relation. Also, 'of my activities' is incorrect here; it should be 'all the activities'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Ann about shopping it allows me to buy an program on the calendar of the things that I have to buy an and I'm not overly spent my money.

✓ And about shopping, it allows me to plan on the calendar the things that I have to buy and I'm not overspending my money.

The phrase 'Ann about' is a misspelling of 'And about'. 'Buy an program' is incorrect; it should be 'plan'. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'calendar'. 'Overly spent my money' is incorrect; 'overspending my money' is the correct form to express avoiding excessive spending.

× Yes, I do a lease at the beginning of the semester because it allows me to. Look forward for activities I have done and got activities I have.

✓ Yes, I do a list at the beginning of the semester because it allows me to look forward to activities I have done and activities I have yet to do.

The phrase 'a lease' is a mishearing or typo for 'a list'. The verb 'look forward' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'for'. Also, 'got activities I have' is unclear; it should be 'activities I have yet to do' to express pending tasks.

× Sometimes I have thought about that and it's maybe probably because they have a very full memory to organize their lives, their shopping on the OR they have very few things to have done during the day or a week.

✓ Sometimes I have thought about that and it's probably because they have a very good memory to organize their lives and their shopping, or they have very few things to do during the day or week.

The phrase 'a very full memory' is incorrect; 'a very good memory' is appropriate. 'On the OR' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'and'. 'To have done' is incorrect here; 'to do' is the correct infinitive to express tasks to be completed.

× You know, it's very interesting the way I organize my life because some of my activities, I have it. Greeting on that journal write written them down on a journal an the other is that they want the right to daily.

✓ You know, it's very interesting the way I organize my life because for some of my activities, I write them down in a journal, and for others, I record them daily on my phone.

The phrase 'Greeting on that journal write written them down on a journal' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition with 'write' is 'in' a journal. 'They want the right to daily' is unclear; it should be 'I record them daily'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects prepositional errors.