List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more fluent and coherent by avoiding repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as tense consistency. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a shopping list on my mobile phone because I tend to forget important items quickly. This helps me remember everything I need to buy from the market and saves me time.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by correcting grammar errors and sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary pauses and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and keep your response focused and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work, especially when I am stressed or have a busy schedule. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

Sugerencia: Complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Provide more specific reasons and examples to enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and rarely forget things. Additionally, they may be naturally well organized, so they feel lists are unnecessary.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'it's the ear of the mobile phones.' Use clear linking words and provide a direct preference with reasons. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily update or check my tasks anytime. Nowadays, most people use smartphones or computers for their to-do lists.

× Yes, I am a very absent minded person and I forget important things in. A short period of time, so I make the list in my mobile phone.

✓ Yes, I am a very absent-minded person and I forget important things in a short period of time, so I make the list on my mobile phone.

The original sentence has a sentence fragment 'in.' which breaks the sentence structure. Also, 'absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded' because it is a compound adjective. The preposition 'in' before 'my mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on' because we use 'on' for devices like phones.

× So I remembered, uh, remember the things which I have gone to take up from the market.

✓ So I remember the things which I have gone to get from the market.

The phrase 'I have gone to take up' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'take up' is not appropriate here; 'get' or 'buy' fits better. Also, mixing 'remembered' and 'remember' is inconsistent; present tense 'remember' fits better here.

× Well, I often make a list for my work because. I'm not a person who for gate. Things very easily, but whenever we are I am very stressed or I have a busy schedule so that time I. Make the list for my work.

✓ Well, I often make a list for my work because I'm not a person who forgets things very easily, but whenever I am very stressed or have a busy schedule, I make a list for my work at that time.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect word usage like 'for gate' instead of 'forget'. Also, 'we are I am' is incorrect; it should be 'I am'. The sentence structure is broken by unnecessary periods. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Because some people have a good memory, they don't forget things easily and they are well organized in their life and the.

✓ Because some people have a good memory, they don't forget things easily and they are well organized in their life.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and the.' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing the incomplete phrase corrects the sentence structure.

× Well, now no one can make a list on. Paper because it's the ear of the mobile phones, smart phones or computers so they.

✓ Well, now no one can make a list on paper because it's the era of mobile phones, smartphones, or computers, so they

The phrase 'it's the ear of the mobile phones' is incorrect; it should be 'it's the era of mobile phones'. Also, 'on. Paper' has an unnecessary period. The definite article 'the' before 'mobile phones' is unnecessary here. Correcting these improves meaning and grammar.

× Make the list on their to do lists in their phones or in their computers so that they remember their works or what to do in.

✓ make the list on their to-do lists in their phones or computers so that they remember their tasks or what to do.

The sentence is a fragment and ends abruptly with 'what to do in.' which is incomplete. 'Works' is incorrect; 'tasks' is better. Also, 'to do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists'. Removing unnecessary prepositions and completing the sentence improves clarity.