Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes I always make a list when I sub to insert that I don't forget anything important and avoiding bills buying. For example when I go to supermarket for my mother I will write them down and make a list and bring it with me when I saw for my mother.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work and it worked very effectively. Glad I think because it can help me organize it and focus on what I do. For example, I will organize my work in different skill in different work on different day.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Some individuals jungle I'm making list. In my experience I think they feel confidence with the ability without random Dell. Have cars I think they percieve making list as time consuming so they can spend this time.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I would refer Michael is on my 4 Raider den on the paper because I bring my fault. Belong to me or Wednesday, so I think it's more convenient in easy for me to access the list of. For addition you can ring an edit the list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to avoid forgetting important items and unnecessary purchases. For example, when I go to the supermarket for my mother, I write down everything she needs and bring the list with me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (hiện tại đơn hoặc hiện tại hoàn thành) và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách bạn tổ chức công việc.
Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work, and it works very effectively. I think it helps me organize my tasks and focus better. For example, I plan different skills to practice on different days.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để diễn đạt ý tưởng của bạn.
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel confident remembering things without writing them down. Also, they may think making lists takes too much time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because I always carry a notebook with me. It is more convenient and easy to access and edit the list anytime.
× Yes I always make a list when I sub to insert that I don't forget anything important and avoiding bills buying.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop to ensure that I don't forget anything important and avoid buying unnecessary items.
The original sentence misuses 'sub to insert' which seems to be a typo for 'shop to ensure'. Also, 'avoiding bills buying' is incorrect; the verb form should be 'avoid buying' to match the sentence structure. Using the base verb 'avoid' followed by the gerund 'buying' is correct here.
× For example when I go to supermarket for my mother I will write them down and make a list and bring it with me when I saw for my mother.
✓ For example, when I go to the supermarket for my mother, I write things down, make a list, and bring it with me when I shop for her.
The sentence has several issues: missing articles ('the supermarket'), incorrect verb tense ('saw' should be 'shop'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting the verb tense to present simple fits the habitual action, and adding commas improves clarity.
× Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work and it worked very effectively.
✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work and it works very effectively.
The sentence mixes present tense ('make') with past tense ('worked'). Since the action is habitual, both verbs should be in present tense. Changing 'worked' to 'works' maintains tense consistency.
× Glad I think because it can help me organize it and focus on what I do.
✓ I am glad, I think, because it can help me organize my work and focus on what I do.
The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'I am' clarifies the subject and verb. Also, specifying 'my work' makes the sentence clearer.
× For example, I will organize my work in different skill in different work on different day.
✓ For example, I organize my work into different skills on different days.
The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'skill' should be 'skills', 'work' is repeated unnecessarily, and 'day' should be plural 'days' to indicate multiple days. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity.
× Some individuals jungle I'm making list.
✓ Some individuals dislike making lists.
The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('jungle' instead of 'dislike' or similar). Replacing with a clear, correct phrase conveys the intended meaning.
× In my experience I think they feel confidence with the ability without random Dell.
✓ In my experience, I think they feel confident in their ability without random details.
'Feel confidence' should be 'feel confident' (adjective form). 'Random Dell' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'random details'. Also, adding commas improves readability.
× Have cars I think they percieve making list as time consuming so they can spend this time.
✓ However, I think they perceive making lists as time-consuming, so they prefer to spend their time differently.
'Have cars' is incorrect; likely meant 'However'. 'Percieve' is misspelled; correct is 'perceive'. 'Making list' should be 'making lists'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.
× I would refer Michael is on my 4 Raider den on the paper because I bring my fault.
✓ I would prefer making my list on paper because I always bring it with me.
The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words ('refer Michael is on my 4 Raider den', 'bring my fault'). Replacing with a clear, correct sentence conveys the intended meaning.
× Belong to me or Wednesday, so I think it's more convenient in easy for me to access the list of.
✓ It belongs to me all the time, so I think it's more convenient and easier for me to access the list.
The sentence has unclear phrases ('Belong to me or Wednesday') and incorrect prepositions. Correcting to 'It belongs to me all the time' and fixing 'in easy' to 'easier' improves clarity.
× For addition you can ring an edit the list.
✓ In addition, you can add and edit the list.
'For addition' should be 'In addition'. 'Ring an edit' is incorrect; likely meant 'add and edit'. Correcting prepositions and verbs clarifies the meaning.