List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain why you make a list. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy. For example, I write down the items on a piece of paper before I leave home, so I don't forget anything.

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and concise answer. Begin with a direct statement, then explain the importance of the list in your work. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make lists every day because I am a shopkeeper. Making lists plays a crucial role in my work as it helps me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear reason why some people avoid making lists, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people do not like making lists because they prefer to keep things in their memory or use their phones to take notes instead.

Sugerencia: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear preference, then explain the reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. For instance, people often forget paper at home, but they always have their phone in their pocket.

× Yes, I always make list when I go to shop becauses it Remember Me think so but I show up and I write down in paper when I went to shopping.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember, so I show up and write it down on paper when I go shopping.

The word 'list' is singular and needs an article 'a' before it. 'Go to shop' should be 'go shopping' as the verb form. 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'Remember Me think so' is unclear and corrected to 'helps me remember'. 'write down in paper' should be 'write it down on paper'. 'when I went to shopping' should be 'when I go shopping' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, I make a list in my daily life because I am a shopkeeper and I you know, shopkeeper always made of list and the list is a crucial role of my life because the use of list I work properly.

✓ Yes, I make a list in my daily life because I am a shopkeeper and, you know, shopkeepers always make lists. The list plays a crucial role in my life because by using the list, I work properly.

'shopkeeper always made of list' is incorrect; it should be 'shopkeepers always make lists' to match plural subject and verb. 'the list is a crucial role' is incorrect; it should be 'the list plays a crucial role'. 'because the use of list I work properly' is unclear and corrected to 'because by using the list, I work properly'.

× In my perspective, the people which are are are not making list because they are interested in food of things and they always are making notes on their phone.

✓ In my perspective, people who do not make lists are interested in other things and they always make notes on their phones.

'the people which are are are not making list' is incorrect; it should be 'people who do not make lists'. 'interested in food of things' is unclear and corrected to 'interested in other things'. 'always are making notes' is better as 'always make notes'. 'their phone' should be plural 'their phones' to match plural subject.

× I prefer to make a list on phone because it is very convenient and sometimes people. People for get a paper on their home and a phone they. Have there in pocket so I prefer to make a list on phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient. Sometimes people forget paper at home, but they have their phone in their pocket, so I prefer to make a list on my phone.

'make a list on phone' should be 'make a list on my phone' to specify possession. 'People for get a paper on their home' should be 'people forget paper at home'. 'a phone they. Have there in pocket' is incorrect and corrected to 'they have their phone in their pocket'. 'there' is incorrect pronoun; it should be 'their'.