Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I always make a list win. I suck because I think is convenient and have me to remember what items I want to buy. For instance, when I went to supermarket I usually use a list to find items I want to buy.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Definitely yes, I always make a list for your from my work and it worked very effectively. For example when I study I else I usually make a list 2 studies Q in different days are like I will study speaking skill in Thursday or in store today.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
In my experience, I think they don't have much time in. They just want to focus on what they think and what they want in their mind and they want to enjoy the time they do it, not to make a list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I re ferd to make a list on my phone day to a paper because it's more convenient and effective because I use my phone all of the day to look up the dictionary in so on. So I think is more convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Ví dụ, hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I need. For example, when I go to the supermarket, I use my list to find everything quickly and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để giải thích và đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể, tránh lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp.
Ejemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For example, I plan to study different skills on different days, like practicing speaking on Thursday and reading on Friday.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do cụ thể. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc.
Ejemplo: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are busy and prefer to focus on their thoughts. Also, they want to enjoy their activities without planning everything in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Bạn nên cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc câu không chính xác.
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient. Since I use my phone all day to look up words and information, it's easier to access my lists anytime.
× Yes, I always make a list win.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop.
The original sentence contains a typo 'win' instead of 'when'. This is a spelling error affecting the present tense context. Correcting it to 'when' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.
× I suck because I think is convenient and have me to remember what items I want to buy.
✓ I do so because I think it is convenient and helps me remember what items I want to buy.
The sentence uses 'suck' incorrectly instead of 'do so' or 'make a list'. Also, 'is' lacks a subject and 'have me to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember'. Correct pronoun and verb usage improves clarity and grammar.
× For instance, when I went to supermarket I usually use a list to find items I want to buy.
✓ For instance, when I go to the supermarket, I usually use a list to find items I want to buy.
The phrase 'went to supermarket' lacks the definite article 'the'. Also, tense should be present 'go' to match 'usually use'. Adding 'the' before 'supermarket' is necessary for correct article usage.
× Definitely yes, I always make a list for your from my work and it worked very effectively.
✓ Definitely yes, I always make a list for my work and it works very effectively.
The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to indicate possession. Also, tense consistency requires 'works' instead of 'worked' to match the present habitual action.
× For example when I study I else I usually make a list 2 studies Q in different days are like I will study speaking skill in Thursday or in store today.
✓ For example, when I study, I usually make a list of study tasks on different days, like studying speaking skills on Thursday or listening today.
The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'I else', '2 studies Q', and 'in store today'. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, removing unclear elements.
× In my experience, I think they don't have much time in.
✓ In my experience, I think they don't have much time.
The preposition 'in' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× They just want to focus on what they think and what they want in their mind and they want to enjoy the time they do it, not to make a list.
✓ They just want to focus on what they think and what they want in their minds, and they want to enjoy the time they have, not to make a list.
'Mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural subject 'they'. Also, 'the time they do it' is unclear; changing to 'the time they have' improves clarity.
× I re ferd to make a list on my phone day to a paper because it's more convenient and effective because I use my phone all of the day to look up the dictionary in so on.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient and effective since I use my phone all day to look up the dictionary and so on.
The phrase 're ferd' is a typo for 'prefer'. 'Day to a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than on paper'. 'All of the day' should be 'all day'. Also, 'in so on' should be 'and so on'. Correcting these improves grammar and clarity.
× So I think is more convenient.
✓ So I think it is more convenient.
The sentence lacks the subject 'it' before 'is'. Adding 'it' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.