List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. For example, instead of "leaves helps me to take everything what I need," say "lists help me remember everything I need." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time at the store.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but repetitive and has some grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to improve flow. For example, instead of repeating "I make a list for my work," say "I find that making a list helps me complete tasks on time."

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks, and as a result, I can finish everything punctually.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to form complete, coherent sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points logically. For example, explain why some people avoid lists and what consequences they might face.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and believe they can remember everything. However, this often leads to forgetting important items when shopping.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and clear explanations. Also, avoid unnecessary pauses or filler words. For example, explain your preference clearly and give a reason.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's more convenient than carrying a paper list.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to market for shopping because leaves helps me to take everything what I need.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the market for shopping because lists help me to take everything that I need.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect here; the correct plural form is 'lists' since the student refers to multiple lists or the concept of lists. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'lists'. Additionally, 'what I need' should be 'that I need' for proper relative clause usage. 'Market' should have the definite article 'the' before it.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to market for shopping because leaves helps me to take everything what I need.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the market for shopping because lists help me to take everything that I need.

The noun 'market' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place the speaker goes to.

× When I make a list for my work. I can finish the work punctually and timely.

✓ When I make a list for my work, I can finish the work punctually and timely.

The original sentence incorrectly uses a period to separate two clauses that should be connected. Replacing the period with a comma correctly links the dependent and independent clauses.

× Some people don't like making a list because. It takes time.

✓ Some people don't like making a list because it takes time.

The period after 'because' incorrectly breaks the sentence. 'Because' should be followed directly by the reason without a period.

× Most of the time when they go to the shop. Day forward. Something.

✓ Most of the time when they go to the shop, they forget something.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb to convey the intended meaning.

× A preferred to make a list on my phone bill 'cause I always carry my phone in my pocket.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry my phone in my pocket.

The pronoun 'A' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. Also, 'preferred' should be present tense 'prefer' to match the context. 'Bill' is unnecessary and likely a mishearing or typo.

× And. I have to carry my phone every single moment if I'm. Make a list on paper.

✓ And I have to carry my phone every single moment. If I make a list on paper, I have to carry the paper as well.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. They need to be combined and completed to form clear, grammatically correct sentences.

× I have to carry the paper Easter.

✓ I have to carry the paper as well.

The word 'Easter' is incorrect here; it should be 'as well' to indicate additionally carrying the paper.